the whole, nothing can be worse than this translation, and if Mr.
Routledge wishes the public to read his version of the Comedie Humaine,
he should engage translators who have some slight knowledge of French.
Cesar Birotteau is better, though it is not by any means free from
mistakes. 'To suffer under the Maximum' is an absurd rendering of 'subir
le maximum'; 'perse' is 'chintz,' not 'Persian chintz'; 'rendre le pain
benit' is not 'to take the wafer'; 'riviere' is hardly a 'fillet of
diamonds'; and to translate 'son coeur avait un calus a l'endroit du
loyer' by 'his heart was a callus in the direction of a lease' is an
insult to two languages. On the whole, the best version is that of the
Duchesse de Langeais, though even this leaves much to be desired. Such a
sentence as 'to imitate the rough logician who marched before the
Pyrrhonians while denying his own movement' entirely misses the point of
Balzac's 'imiter le rude logicien qui marchait devant les pyrrhoniens,
qui niaient le mouvement.'
We fear Mr. Routledge's edition will not do. It is well printed and
nicely bound; but his translators do not understand French. It is a
great pity, for La Comedie Humaine is one of the masterpieces of the age.
Balzac's Novels in English. The Duchesse de Langeais and Other Stories;
Cesar Birotteau. (Routledge and Sons.)
TWO NEW NOVELS
(Pall Mall Gazette, September 16, 1880.)
Most modern novels are more remarkable for their crime than for their
culture, and Mr. G. Manville Fenn's last venture is no exception to the
general rule. The Master of the Ceremonies is turbid, terrifying and
thrilling. It contains, besides many 'moving accidents by flood and
field,' an elopement, an abduction, a bigamous marriage, an attempted
assassination, a duel, a suicide, and a murder. The murder, we must
acknowledge, is a masterpiece. It would do credit to Gaboriau, and
should make Miss Braddon jealous. The Newgate Calendar itself contains
nothing more fascinating, and what higher praise than this can be given
to a sensational novel? Not that Lady Teigne, the hapless victim, is
killed in any very new or subtle manner. She is merely strangled in bed,
like Desdemona; but the circumstances of the murder are so peculiar that
Claire Denville, in common with the reader, suspects her own father of
being guilty, while the father is convinced that the real criminal is his
eldest son. Stuart Denville himself, the Master of the Ceremonies, is
most powerfully drawn. He is a penniless, padded dandy who, by a careful
study of the 'grand style' in deportment, has succeeded in making himself
the Brummel of the promenade and the autocrat of the Assembly Rooms. A
light comedian by profession, he is suddenly compelled to play the
principal part in a tragedy. His shallow, trivial nature is forced into
the loftiest heroism, the noblest self-sacrifice. He becomes a hero
against his will. The butterfly goes to martyrdom, the fop has to become
fine.
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