The Girl's Own Paper, Vol. XX. No. 1010, May 6, 1899Various
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The Girl's Own Paper, Vol. XX. No. 1010, May 6, 1899
Various
Children's literature -- Periodicals
GRIBBITE.—The metre of your blank verse is quite correct. The writing
of blank verse that shall be really musical is very difficult, for
the author has no rhymes to depend upon, and the arrangement of ideas
and words has to be of peculiar charm and melody. But we can honestly
praise your effort. “Good-bye, old year” is not quite so satisfactory.
Never make an elision obviously for metre’s sake, especially where you
only do it in one instance, as
“Whenever, where’er ’tis said.”
Here both “evers,” or neither, should be written in the abbreviated
form.
EMMA PORTLOCK.—Unfortunately your hymn could not find acceptance for
publication. The metre is very faulty, and the thought expressed is
familiar. “Farewell, Canadian friends!” is better, but we cannot
encourage you to do more than to write for your own gratification.
COUNTRY LASS.—We are sorry we omitted to criticise your writing in
our answer some weeks ago. To begin with, you should use better ink
that will not turn brown. Keep a regular space between your lines, and
refrain from leaving a margin at the end of some of them. The writing
itself would be improved by more decision and firmness, the letters
being larger. You can easily make it into a good hand.
MABEL BROWN.—1. We have inserted your address for “FLORENCE” to see.—2.
No doubt character to some extent can be described from handwriting;
for instance, a neat precise person seldom writes a bold, sketchy,
untidy hand; a very excitable, nervous person seldom writes a neat,
close hand, and so on; but we do not believe that every moral and
intellectual quality can be deciphered by this means. Of course we
cannot tell how far the estimate you enclose is correct, but we thank
you for your pleasant letter.
DOLLY.—We do not think any permission is needed for reciting the poem
you name. Many thanks for your answer to “NINETTE.”
OUR OPEN LETTER BOX.
KYLE, Victoria, Australia, writes to inform “GOLD DUST” that “Tit for
Tat” is published as a song, in two keys, E♭ and C. The words are by
“Nemo,” and the music by Henry Pontet. The song can be procured at
Enoch and Sons, 14 and 14A, Great Marlborough Street, London. “KYLE”
would copy out and forward the song to “GOLD DUST,” if she knew her
address.
“NINETTE” (Budapesth) again has answers—from “DOLLY,” who says
“Somebody’s Darling” is to be found in Walker’s _Golden Reciter_
(William Walker and Sons, Otley, Yorkshire, price 1s. 6d.); from
“VICTORIA,” who refers it and the “Song of the Shirt” to _Recitations
for Recreation_, in verse, collected by Mary Trebeck (Wells, Gardner,
Darton & Co., 44, Victoria Street, London, S.W., price about 1s.),
and from “A. A. L. S.,” who mentions the _Royal Reader_, No. VI. MISS
MARGUERITE FITZROY DIXON, 1919, Florence Street, Ottawa, offers to copy
out and send “Ninette” the poem, “Somebody’s Darling,” on receipt of
her address.
MOLLY DARLING wishes to know the author of a “poem,” which we can
inform her is a well-known nursery rhyme, beginning—
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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