Eloise was much beloved by all the youth in the village, and there was
not one who would not gladly have taken her to wife; but none loved her
so much as did Herman and Ludwig. Nor did Eloise care for any but Herman
and Ludwig, and she loved Herman. The burgomaster said: "Choose whom you
will--I care not! So long as he be honest I will have him for a son and
thank Heaven for him."
So Eloise chose Herman, and all said she chose wisely; for Herman was
young and handsome, and by his valor had won distinction in the army,
and had thrice been complimented by the general. So when the brave young
captain led Eloise to the altar there was great rejoicing in the
village. The beaux, forgetting their disappointments, and the maidens,
seeing the cause of all their jealousy removed, made merry together; and
it was said that never had there been in the history of the province an
event so joyous as was the wedding of Herman and Eloise.
But in all the Village there was one aching heart. Ludwig, the young
musician, saw with quiet despair the maiden he loved go to the altar
with another. He had known Eloise from childhood, and he could not say
when his love of her began, it was so very long ago; but now he knew his
heart was consumed by a hopeless passion. Once, at a village festival,
he had begun to speak to her of his love; but Eloise had placed her hand
kindly upon his lips and told him to say no further, for they had
always been and always would be brother and sister. So Ludwig never
spoke his love after that, and Eloise and he were as brother and sister;
but the love of her grew always within him, and he had no thought but of
her.
And now, when Eloise and Herman were wed, Ludwig feigned that he had
received a message from a rich relative in a distant part of the kingdom
bidding him come thither, and Ludwig went from the village and was seen
there no more.
When the burgomaster died all his possessions went to Herman and Eloise;
and they were accounted the richest folk in the province, and so good
and charitable were they that they were beloved by all. Meanwhile Herman
had risen to greatness in the army, for by his valorous exploits he had
become a general, and he was much endeared to the king. And Eloise and
Herman lived in a great castle in the midst of a beautiful park, and the
people came and paid them reverence there.
And no one in all these years spoke of Ludwig. No one thought of him.
Ludwig was forgotten. And so the years went by.
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