English literature -- 19th century -- History and criticism; Literature -- History and criticism
wilfulness, freakishness, and modish obscurity. He is a poet all of
gold, universal as humanity, simple as childhood, musical now as the flow
of his own rivers, now as the heavy plunging wave of his own Ocean.
Such, then, as far as weak words can speak of him, is the first and
greatest of poets. This is he whom English boys are to be ignorant of,
if Greek be ousted from our schools, or are to know only in the
distorting mirror of a versified, or in the pale shadow of a prose
translation. Translations are good only as teachers to bring men to
Homer. English verse has no measure which even remotely suggests the
various flow of the hexameter. Translators who employ verse give us a
feeble Homer, dashed with their own conceits, and moulded to their own
style. Translators who employ prose "tell the story without the song,"
but, at least, they add no twopenny "beauties" and cheap conceits of
their own.
I venture to offer a few examples of original translation, in which the
mannerisms of poets who have, or have not, translated Homer, are
parodied, and, of course (except in the case of Pope), exaggerated. The
passage is the speech of the Second-sighted Man, before the slaying of
the wooers in the hall:--
"Ah! wretched men, what ill is this ye suffer? In night are swathed
your heads, your faces, your knees; and the voice of wailing is
kindled, and cheeks are wet with tears, and with blood drip the walls,
and the fair main beams of the roof, and the porch is full of shadows,
and full is the courtyard, of ghosts that hasten hellward below the
darkness, and the sun has perished out of heaven, and an evil mist
sweeps up over all."
So much for Homer. The first attempt at metric translation here given is
meant to be in the manner of Pope:
"Caitiffs!" he cried, "what heaven-directed blight
Involves each countenance with clouds of night!
What pearly drop the ashen cheek bedews!
Why do the walls with gouts ensanguined ooze?
The court is thronged with ghosts that 'neath the gloom
Seek Pluto's realm, and Dis's awful doom;
In ebon curtains Phoebus hides his head,
And sable mist creeps upward from the dead."
This appears pretty bad, and nearly as un-Homeric as a translation could
possibly be. But Pope, aided by Broome and Fenton, managed to be much
less Homeric, much more absurd, and infinitely more "classical" in the
sense in which Pope is classical:
"O race to death devote! with Stygian shade
Each destined peer impending fates invade;
With tears your wan distorted cheeks are drowned;
With sanguine drops the walls are rubied round:
Thick swarms the spacious hall with howling ghosts,
To people Orcus and the burning coasts!
Nor gives the sun his golden orb to roll,
But universal night usurps the pole."
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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