The Girl's Own Paper, Vol. XX, No. 995, January 21, 1899Various
General
The Girl's Own Paper, Vol. XX, No. 995, January 21, 1899
Various
Children's literature -- Periodicals
VERONICA.--Your story shows lack of experience. In order to make
us really interested in the love affairs of “Agatha,” there should
have been opportunity for the reader to study her character and
circumstances. There is no special point in the mere fact of her
receiving an offer of marriage from someone who is little more than a
name. A short story should as far as possible have its action in the
present, and not expect the reader to draw overmuch on his imagination.
AN INTERESTED READER.--1. You are certainly not too old to be coached
for the London Matriculation Examination. We hold in our hand a
prospectus of the “Queen Margaret Correspondence Classes,” which
prepare for that amongst other examinations. If you write to Miss
Birrell, 31, Lansdowne Crescent, Glasgow, she will send you full
particulars of subjects and fees. Tell her that you are a governess,
and wish to prepare for the London Matriculation.--2. “The Legend
of Bregenz” is by Adelaide Anne Proctor, and may be found in any
collection of her poems.
A NEW READER.--The metre of your lines is defective, and they would not
be accepted for publication. You give a vigorous description of the
well-known picture; but every poem should have some metre or “form” in
which it is written, and your “third lines” are wrong in every respect.
Study the laws of versification.
AN ARDENT ADMIRER OF THE “G. O. P.”--We like the spirit of your verses,
and the substance of them, but are obliged to tell you that the form
is very imperfect. The metre halts continually. Your ear can perhaps
discern that these first lines are not of the same cadence.
“O knowledge, replied the thinker.”
“All these and more the secrets are.”
The number of syllables may be the same, but the accent varies. You
should read good poetry, and if you wish to write verse, study the laws
of versification.
BLACK AND WHITE.--Your sketches are full of promise, but are not up
to the standard for publication. As you are so young, and have had no
Art-education, it seems to us that your father should strive to send
you to Art schools, as it undoubtedly would pay in the long run. You
have decided though unformed talent for black and white figure work.
INTERNATIONAL CORRESPONDENCE.
MISS L. MYLES, 13, Upper Mallow St., Limerick, Ireland, would like
a German correspondent to whom she could write in English, the lady
replying in German.
C. RAHIER’S note has arrived too late for its purpose. “HIGHLAND
LASSIE,” c/o Post Office, St. Cyrus, Scotland, would be pleased to
correspond with some nice French girl of good family. She would like
her correspondent to be about sixteen or seventeen years of age, and
“Highland Lassie” begs to say that she speaks French, and that she is
very fond of literature, music, and drawing.
MADEMOISELLE LOUISE FRANÇOIS, of Anzin, Nord, France, will be pleased
to correspond and exchange stamps with girls living in South and North
America, New Zealand, or any part of Australia.
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