"If I did, it would be to find out what you really did think about
them," Elaine replied. "Most people would say nice things, anyway, but I
believe you’d be honest, Peggy." She looked at her friend rather
appealingly. "I don’t want to waste my time on what isn’t going to
amount to anything."
Peggy felt a marked decline of enthusiasm. "Of course I’m not any
critic," she said uncomfortably. "I can tell you what I think, but that
won’t be worth much."
"It’s what I want, anyway." Elaine jerked a bulky manuscript from its
sheath and settled herself in a rocking-chair. "The name of this," she
announced in a defiant voice, "is the ’Maid of the Haunted Well.’ It’s
a story for children, you see."
"O, yes." Peggy leaned forward in an attitude of close attention, while
Elaine began to read with a rapidity which gave small heed to the marks
of punctuation.
"Long ago, on the edge of a vast and mighty forest, lived a young girl,
known far and near as the Maid of the Haunted Well. Fair she was, with
lustrous, golden hair, that fell in a profusion of silky ringlets. Deep
blue were her eyes. Far and wide had the fame of her loveliness spread,
and many came to see for themselves if she was as ravishingly beautiful
as she was reported to be."
"How wretchedly you are reading, Elaine," remonstrated her mother. "It
is impossible to get any idea of the real excellence of the story when
you hurry that way." With an evident effort Elaine slackened her speed
and continued.
"The Maid of the Haunted Well had hosts of lovers, but to one and all
she gave one answer ’Wouldst wed me? Then drink with me one cup of
water from the Haunted Well. Whosoever tastes this water shall never--’"
The monotonous voice ceased suddenly, and the sheets comprising the
"Maid of the Haunted Well" strewed the carpet like gigantic snow-flakes.
"Elaine!" cried Mrs. Marshall.
"I can’t go on with it. It chokes me. Peggy, don’t you think it’s
silly?"
Peggy’s struggle between her candor and her sympathy resulted in
something of compromise. "I didn’t know just what you were trying to
bring out about the haunted well," she replied. "But it sounded rather
ingenious, and interesting. At the same time--"
"Well?" It was Mrs. Marshall who insisted on the conclusion of the
sentence. Elaine was staring gloomily at the carpet.
"O, I only wondered if nice breezy stories about jolly boys and girls
wouldn’t take a little better, but, of course, I don’t know anything
about it."
"They are not all children’s stories," said Mrs. Marshall, as Elaine
preserved an uncompromising silence. "Read her the ’Daughter’s
Defiance,’ Elaine."
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