Grandparent and child -- Fiction; Spanish Americans -- Fiction
Olive, sitting sewing by the window, was, naturally, somewhat startled.
“Mercy on us, Rachel!” she exclaimed. “What IS it?”
“Look!” cried the housekeeper, pointing to the contribution in the
“Poets' Corner” as Queen Isabella may have pointed at the evidence of
her proteges discovery of a new world. “LOOK!”
Mrs. Snow looked, read the verses to herself, and then aloud.
“Why, I declare, they're real sort of pretty, ain't they?” she
exclaimed, in astonished admiration.
“Pretty! They're perfectly elegant! And right here in the paper for all
hands to see. Ain't you PROUD of him, Mrs. Snow?”
Olive had been growing more and more proud of her handsome grandson ever
since his arrival. She was prouder still now and said so. Rachel nodded,
triumphantly.
“He'll be a Robert Penfold afore he dies, or I miss MY guess!” she
declared.
She showed it to feminine acquaintances all over town, and Olive, when
callers came, took pains to see that a copy of the Item, folded with the
“Poets' Corner” uppermost, lay on the center table. Customers, dropping
in at the office, occasionally mentioned the poem to its author.
“See you had a piece in the Item, Al,” was their usual way of referring
to it. “Pretty cute piece 'twas, too, seemed to me. Say, that girl of
yours must have SOME spring bunnit. Ho, ho!”
Issachar deigned to express approval, approval qualified with discerning
criticism of course, but approval nevertheless.
“Pretty good piece, Al,” he observed. “Pretty good. Glad to see you done
so well. Course you made one little mistake, but 'twan't a very big one.
That part where you said--What was it, now? Where'd I put that piece of
poetry? Oh, yes, here 'tis! Where you said--er--er--
'It floats upon her golden curls
As froth upon the wave.'
Now of course nothin'--a hat or nothin' else--is goin' to float on top
of a person's head. Froth floatin', that's all right, you understand;
but even if you took froth right out of the water and slapped it up onto
anybody's hair 'twouldn't FLOAT up there. If you'd said,
'It SETS up onto her golden curls,
Same as froth sets on top of a wave.'
that would have been all right and true. But there, don't feel bad about
it. It's only a little mistake, same as anybody's liable to make. Nine
persons out of ten wouldn't have noticed it. I'm extry partic'lar, I
presume likely. I'm findin' mistakes like that all the time.”
Laban's comment was less critical, perhaps, but more reserved.
“It's pretty good, Al,” he said. “Yes--er--yes, sir, it's pretty good.
It ain't all new, there's some of it that's been written before, but I
rather guess that might have been said about Shakespeare's poetry when
he fust commenced. It's pretty good, Al. Yes--yes, yes. It is so.”
Albert was inclined to resent the qualified strain in the bookkeeper's
praise. He was tempted to be sarcastic.
“Well,” he observed, “of course you've read so much real poetry that you
ought to know.”
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