Mexico -- History -- Revolution, 1910-1920 -- Fiction
Raul had stayed in a peasant hut during the rain, a thatched room where
woven fronds, carefully herringboned, shut out most of the downpour. A
pig slept in a corner. Raul sat on a wooden chest; the owner and his
wife squatted on a mat. Above the pig, in a sisal hammock, swung a
child. Another hammock was looped over a peg, its pouch resembling a
gray moth's case. The deluge shut out nearly all light. Through the
open doorway mist drubbed. Nobody tried to talk. Raul dozed. When
the rain stopped, he thanked the pair, accepted a chunk of sugar cane
for Chico, and got on his horse and rode off.
Chico trotted briskly, whiffing the rain-washed air as they followed a
trail through pastureland where knots of Herefords grazed. Belly high
to the horse, a stone wall paralleled the trail, iguanas here and there.
At a bend, Chico whirled sidewise, and pain from his bullet wound shot
through Raul. He thought he might topple, but somehow managed to keep
his saddle, as the horse pirouetted. Shouting, commanding, he dug his
spurs. The horse screamed. Then, Raul saw the snake, a good-sized
rattler.
Dragging violently at the bit, he checked Chico underneath some orange
trees and dismounted, thoroughly disgusted.
"You fool. Haven't you ever seen a rattler before? You ought to learn
a thing or two. You crazy fool--you're no colt!"
The snake slithered away through the grass.
At the dam, the foreman told Raul that they had less than a week's
work, though the cracks in the dam appeared formidable. Raul sucked
his pipe, nodded his head, simply agreeing. The place oozed gnats and
flies. Sandpipers paraded the shallows.
Remaining on his horse, Raul chatted with the workers, all of them in
breechclouts or shorts. A number wore conical hats of a nearby
mountaineer clan. The southerners had bodies like chocolate. Some
spoke no Spanish. Through the years, Raul had acquired an Indian
vocabulary of sorts and he tried to josh the men but none of his jokes
got across. He slapped at gnats, and left as soon as he could.
On his way home, he felt a sense of freedom. The breadth of the land
affected him. Uncle Roberto had said: "It does something to a man to
live on a place you can't ride across in days." Though Raul had been
born at Petaca, he realized there were parts he had never seen, hill
country, mountain fields, lava terrain, streams. A subforeman insisted
that a lake existed in Sector 25. Recently someone told of Indians
camping in 31, thatched huts in a valley of willows.
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