The editor cleared his throat with some embarrassment, but before he
found the words he wanted, Miss Graham spoke again.
"I had not the slightest idea of being sarcastic, for, of course, it
goes without saying that your story is better than mine; but since you
choose to take it in that way, I am willing to leave the whole matter to
Mr. Lane. He is at least the only person who has read both manuscripts."
"Really," Mr. Lane said, thus pushed into a corner, "I am extremely
sorry to find myself placed in so trying a situation. There are points
in which each story excels, and the best result would undoubtedly be
attained by welding them together."
"If that could be done," said Miss Graham, thoughtfully.
"Now, in Mr. Gray's version," he continued, "the heroine is more
attractive and real."
"That," I interpolated, trying to cover the awkwardness I felt by
a jest, "is the first time in all my literary experience that the
character I thought best in a story I'd written has seemed so to the
editorial mind."
The dark eyes of my neighbor gave me a bright, brief glance, but whether
of sympathy with my statement or of contempt for the feebleness of my
attempts at being jocose, I could not determine.
"While Miss Graham," went on the editorial comment, "has decidedly the
advantage in her hero."
Miss Graham flushed slightly, but offered no remark in reply to this
opinion beyond a smile which seemed one of frank pleasure. We sat in
silence a moment, a not unnatural hesitancy preventing my making a
proposition which had presented itself to my mind.
"If it will not seem impertinent to Miss Graham," I ventured at length,
"I would propose that we really do try the experiment of collaboration
on this story. I have never worked with anybody, but I promise to be
tractable; and the thing had so odd a beginning that it is a pity to
thwart the evident intention of destiny that we shall both have a hand
in it."
To this proposition the lady at first returned a decided and even
peremptory negative; but my persuasions, seconded by those of Mr. Lane,
who was partly curious and partly anxious to escape from the necessity
of arbitrating in the matter, in the end induced her to alter her
decision.
The result of the interview was that when we left the office of the
"Dark Red" Miss Graham had my manuscript and I hers, and that an
appointment had been made for my calling upon her with a view to an
interchange of comments and criticisms.
Upon the appointed evening I presented myself at the home of Miss
Graham, and almost without the usual conventionalities concerning
the weather we proceeded to discuss the stories. We began with great
outward suavity and courtesy the exchange of compliments, which were so
obviously formal and perfunctory that in a moment more we looked into
each other's faces and burst into laughter which if hardly polite was
at least genuine.
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