Henry insisted on an agreement which gave him ten per cent. of the gross
receipts. Soon after the news of the signed contract had reached the
press, Mr. Louis Lewis, the English agent of Lionel Belmont, of the
United States Theatrical Trust, came unostentatiously round to Ashley
Gardens, and obtained the American rights on the same terms.
Then Pilgrim said that he must run through the manuscript with Henry,
and teach him those things about the theatre which he did not know.
Henry arrived at Prince's at eleven o'clock, by appointment; Mr. Pilgrim
came at a quarter to twelve.
'You have the sense _du theatre_, my friend,' said Pilgrim, turning over
the leaves of the manuscript. 'That precious and incommunicable
gift--you have it. But you are too fond of explanations. Now, the public
won't stand explanations. No long speeches. And so whenever I glance
through a play I can tell instantly whether it is an acting play. If I
see a lot of speeches over four lines long, I say, Dull! Useless! Won't
do! For instance, here. That speech of Veronica's while she's at the
piano. Dull! I see it. I feel it. It must go! The last two lines must
go!'
So saying, he obliterated the last two lines with a large and imperial
blue pencil.
'But it's impossible,' Henry protested. 'You've not read them.'
'I don't need to read them,' said John Pilgrim. 'I know they won't do. I
know the public won't have them. It must be give and take--give and take
between the characters. The ball must be kept in the air. Ah! The
theatre!' He paused, and gave Henry a piercing glance. 'Do you know how
I came to be _du theatre_--of the theatre, young man?' he demanded. 'No?
I will tell you. My father was an old fox-hunting squire in the Quorn
country. One of the best English families, the Pilgrims, related to the
Earls of Waverley. Poor, unfortunately. My eldest brother was brought up
to inherit the paternal mortgages. My second brother went into the army.
And they wanted me to go into the Church. I refused. "Well," said my
old father, "damn it, Jack! if you won't go to heaven, you may as well
ride straight to hell. Go on the stage." And I did, sir. I did. Idea for
a book there, isn't there?'
The blue-pencilling of the play proceeded. But whenever John Pilgrim
came to a long speech by Hubert, the part which he destined for himself,
he hesitated to shorten it. 'It's too long! It's too long!' he
whispered. 'I feel it's too long. But, somehow, that seems to me
essential to the action. I must try to carry it off as best I can.'
At the end of the second act Henry suggested an interval for lunch, but
John Pilgrim, opening Act III. accidentally, and pouncing on a line with
his blue pencil, exclaimed with profound interest:
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