A Household Book of English Poetry: Selected and Arranged with Notes
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A Household Book of English Poetry: Selected and Arranged with Notes
American poetry; English poetry
P. 117, No. cv.--I have taken the liberty of omitting nine out of the
twenty-six stanzas of which this fine hymn is composed; I believe that
it has gained much by the omission. The sense that a poor stanza is not
merely no gain, but a serious injury, to a poem, was not Cowley’s; still
less that willingness to sacrifice parts to the effect of the whole,
which induced Gray to leave out a stanza, in itself as exquisite as any
which remain, from his _Elegy_; which led Milton to omit from the
Spirit’s _Prologue_ in _Comus_ sixteen glorious lines which may still be
seen in his original MSS. at Cambridge, and have been often reprinted in
the notes to later editions of his Poems.--l. 45-56: Johnson has said,
urging the immense improvement in the mechanism of English verse which
we owe to Dryden and the little which had been done before him, ‘if
Cowley had sometimes a finished line, he had it by chance.’ Let Dryden
have all the honour which is justly his due, but not at the expense of
others. There are doubtless a few weak and poor lines in this poem even
as now presented, but what a multitude of others, these twelve for
example, without a single exception, of perfect grace and beauty, and as
satisfying to the ear as to the mind.--l. 68: This line is certainly
perplexing. In all the earlier editions of Cowley which I have examined
it runs thus,
‘Of colours mingled, Light, a thick and standing lake.’
In the modern, so far as they have come under my eye, it is printed,
‘Of colours mingled light a thick and standing lake.’
The line seems in neither shape to yield any tolerable sense--not in the
first, with ‘Light’ regarded as a vocative, which, for the line so
pointed, seems the only possible construction; nor yet in the second,
which only acquires some sort of meaning when ‘colours’ is treated as a
genitive plural. I have marked it as such, but am so little satisfied
with the result, that, were this book to print again, I should recur to
the earlier reading, which, however unsatisfactory, should not be
disturbed, unless for such an emendation as carries conviction with it.
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