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'Hardly anything; and yet if I may venture a criticism--would you mind
passing your manuscript on to me for a moment? May I suggest an emendation
that will render the recitation more easy and more effective?'
'Certainly you may.'
'Then,' Dick continued, 'I would drop the words--"just as a triumph of
evil," and run on--"flourish from childhood, ensnaring the noble, the
brave, and the loyal, spreading their nets for destruction,"
'"Harpyiae flourish in ball-rooms, breathing fierce breath
that is poison
Over the promise of manhood, over the faith and the
lovelight
That glows in the hearts of our bravest for all of their
kind that is weaker----"
'All that follows,' Dick added, 'will be recited without emphasis until you
come to these two magnificent lines:
'"Harpyiae stand by our altars, Harpyiae sit by our
hearthstones,
Harpyiae suckle our children, Harpyiae ravish our
nation," etc.'
Dick finished with a grand gesture.
'I think you're right. Yes, I understand that a point can be given to these
verses that I had not thought of before. I hope my poem touched a chord in
your heart? Do you approve of my manner of writing the hexameters?'
'I think the idea very fine, but----'
'But?'
'If you will permit me?'
'Certainly.'
'Well, there are questions of elocution that I would like to speak to you
about. I've to run away now, but we're sure to meet again.'
'I'm on the pier every day at noon, or you will find me in my hotel at
five. I hope you'll come, for I should like to avail myself of your
instruction.'
'Thank you; I hope to have the pleasure of calling upon you to-morrow
afternoon. Good-bye.'
'You don't know my name,' she cried after him. 'Heroes are full of
forgetfulness and naturally, but in this tea-table world we can't get on
without names and addresses. Will you take my card?'
Dick took the card, thanked her and turned suddenly away.
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