Free verse; Modernism (Literature); Poetry, Modern -- 20th century -- History and criticism
On sways the tilting train:
We feel the carriage bluffly sideways blown,
We see the chill shower brighten on the pane,
We hear the high wind through the lantern moan,
We three borne ever through the wind and rain,
We three who meet here not to meet again,
We three poor faring fools who sit alone.
But toward the end there is a romantic lapse to excuse the liberties
taken:
But the giant Train begins a confident song
“Why be so meek, so proud, when both are wrong.”
Sacheverell Sitwell can write even more casually of the train. For
romantic lapses like the following in _At Breakfast_:
A railway engine ran across the field
Galloping like a swift horse down the rails.
As it came quicker the window-panes rattled,
The roof shook side to side: all its beams trembled,
Thundering hoofs were upon us--glass chariots.
are not even real lapses like Mr. Nichols’ but a half-satiric “Look:
modernist though I am, I can still be romantic about old-fashioned
romantic subjects like the railway train.” It is now not a ‘monster’
but a charming early-Victorian _objet de vertu_ under a glass
dome. We find Miss Marianne Moore describing expanding bookcases
and books printed on india-paper in a serious poem, without
self-consciousness:
the vast indestructible necropolis
of composite Yawman-Erbe separable units;
the steel, the oak, the glass, the Poor Richard publications
containing the public secrets of efficiency
on “paper so thin that one thousand four hundred and
twenty pages make one inch.”
Without self-consciousness? Perhaps that is too much to say when
so short a space of years separate poetry of this sort from the
once-advanced poetry of, say, Richard Le Gallienne, a ‘decadent’ of
the ’nineties still alive and at present living in the same city as
Miss Moore, like her a literary critic; a city where there must be
large backward sections of the reading public to whom Mr. Le Gallienne
is still an advanced writer because he has, perhaps, written familiarly
of the Devil and the sweets of sin.
But is it necessary for the poet to come to the point, after a long
history of gradually acclimatizing his verse to what were once
considered unpoetical subjects, where he can, with Miss Moore, bring
himself to insert fourteen unrevised and consecutive words straight
from a newspaper advertisement into his poem, and put them into
quotation marks as well? Though a feat of poetic self-martyrdom,
doubtless, and perhaps the logical conclusion of giving civilization
what it wants--verse actually interpretative of what is called ‘the
poetry of modern business’--it is bad for both poetry and business:
the quotation would have been much more effective left in the original
setting to compose the daily synthetic advertisement-poem of the
morning newspaper.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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