Free verse; Modernism (Literature); Poetry, Modern -- 20th century -- History and criticism
And it is Inness on the meadows and fruit is
yellow ripening in windows every minute
growing brighter in the bulblight by the
cabbages and spuds--
And all there is is won
What are black 4 A.M’s after all but black
4 A.M’s like anything else: a tree,
a fork, a leaf, a pane of glass--?
And all there is is won
A relic of old decency; a very personal friend
And all there is is won
_Envoi_
Pic, your crows feed at your windowsill
Asso, try and get near mine....
And all there is is won
This is obvious charlatanry: a synthetic modernist poetry composed
of ingredients plainly imitative of those that go to make up the
poems of more genuine writers, and yet not too closely resembling
them. There is a mystic refrain such as T. S. Eliot has used,
typographic nonconformity as in E. E. Cummings, a reference to modern
painting--the divided word _Picasso_, which also suggests the
verbal disintegration which appears more completely in James Joyce.
Possibly the crows occur in an actual picture: possibly they refer
to the black 4 A.M.’s. There is also the up-to-date mannerism of
marking the poem “Incomplete” and publishing it with lacunae shown by
dots enclosed in parentheses. There is a passing satiric reference
to Philosophy in “Inness on the meadows”, called attention to by the
modernist diction of “bulblight” and “spuds”. The pretended subject is
the random thoughts that occur to a poet half awake and half asleep
at 4 A.M. The realistic window cord gives the reader a false
confidence that “And all there is is won” has some sense; whereas it is
an unrelated phrase suggesting those that occur without discoverable
sense in dreams. The poem continues:
Out of such drab trash as this
by a metamorphosis
bright as wallpaper or crayon
or where the sun casts ray on ray on
flowers in a dish, weave, weave
for Poesy a gaudy sleeve
a scarf, a cap and find him gloves
white as the backs of Turtledoves....
This last, dangerously near enough to Edith Sitwell in the third line
and in the last three lines, is an assumption of poetic awareness
within the poem of the poem itself--another modernist mannerism. The
‘drab trash’ is carefully collected--in imitation of T. S. Eliot--to
set off the ‘fine writing’ that follows. Not only Edith Sitwell but,
in the rest of the poem, Milton’s nativity hymn, a popular song and a
reference to oleochromes contribute. Dr. Williams’ early poetic travels
are outlined on the dust-cover of his _Sour Grapes_:
The surer and sounder but not the less unusual handling of free verse
by a contributor to the original Imagist anthology and a later member
of the so-called “Others” school, who has already made a distinct
place for himself in contemporary poetry.
his more recent ones in the first paragraph of a chapter of his _In
the American Grain_:
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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