Ancient rhetoric and poetic : $b Interpreted from representative worksBaldwin, Charles Sears
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Ancient rhetoric and poetic : $b Interpreted from representative works
Baldwin, Charles Sears
Classical literature -- History and criticism -- Theory, etc.; Poetics -- History -- To 1500; Rhetoric, Ancient
The variability that he shows in the Greek word order is wider than in
English. In both languages it is controlled by usage, by what is habitual
and therefore expected; and this fact seems to be ignored by Dionysius.
Even a Greek could not shape a sentence at his own will without reference
to the habit of the language. But in this respect Greek usage, because
the Greek could rely on showing sentence relations by inflection, was
less restrictive than English usage. For English, then, it is not true to
say that there is no sentence norm, no normal or natural order. That the
norm is not determined by logic in the sense of abstract analysis is true
for either, or any, language; but in modern languages, much more than
in Greek, it is restricted by usage. Every careful translator has found
his efforts to convey Greek style hampered by the inferior variability
of modern sentence habits. Taken more generally, however, the contention
of Dionysius is sound and suggestive. It is that the order of words in a
sentence is not predetermined by logic, that it is freely adaptable, and
that this adaptation constitutes a large element in effectiveness.
Having thus vindicated the right of the speaker or writer to deal with
the order of his words artistically, unfettered by logic, Dionysius
proceeds to inquire in what artistic shaping consists.
The functions of _compositio_ [the tasks of sentence movement]
seem to me to be three: (1) to discern what goes naturally
with what to make a beautiful and satisfying combination; (2)
to know how to make systematically out of these potential
agreements a better harmony; (3) if revision is still
necessary, whether abridgement, expansion, or alteration, to
know how to work out the adaptation as the potential values
demand. The scope of each of these I will explain more clearly
by using certain analogies from the industrial arts with which
all are familiar: house-building, ship-building, and the
like. When a builder has provided himself with the material
from which he intends to construct a house—stones, timbers,
tiling, and all the rest—he then puts together the structure
from these, studying the following three things: what stone,
timber, and brick can be united with what other stone, timber,
and brick; next, how each piece of the material that is being
so united should be set, and on which of its faces; thirdly,
if anything fits badly, how that particular thing can be
chipped and trimmed and made to fit exactly. And the shipwright
proceeds in just the same way. So, I say, they also should work
whose task is to compose sentences well.[18]
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