British Quarterly Review, American Edition, Vol. LIV: July and October, 1871Various
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British Quarterly Review, American Edition, Vol. LIV: July and October, 1871
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English periodicals
Mr. Jowett's version of this dialogue is fully as lax as that of the
_Symposium_. Still it reads pleasantly, and if one could forget the
incomparable and often so much more expressive Greek, one would be
fairly content with the general correctness of the paraphrase. Almost
at the outset, he renders εἴ σοι σχολὴ προϊόντι ἀκούειν, 'if you have
leisure to _stay and listen_,' instead of 'to _walk on_ and listen,'
where a slight satire is intended on the 'constitutional' and
prescribed exercise of the effeminate youth. And γέγραφε γὰρ δὴ ὁ
Λυσίας πειρώμενόν τινα τῶν καλῶν, οὐχ ὑπ' ἐραστοῦ δὲ, ἀλλ' αὐτὸ τοῦτο
καὶ κεκόμψευται means, 'Lysias, you must know, has written about one
of the handsome youths having proposals made to him, not, however, by
a lover; but this is the very point he has put in a new and quaint
light.' (Of course, κεκόμψευται, to which we have given a medial
sense, may also be taken as a passive.) Mr. Jowett gives us nothing
nearer to the above than 'Lysias _imagined_ a fair youth who was being
tempted, but not by a lover; and this was the point; he ingeniously
proved that,' &c. In p. 229, A., κατὰ τὸν Ἰλισσὸν ἴωμεν should be
rendered, 'let us go _along_ or _down_ the Ilissus,' _i.e._, in the
bed or channel, or even along the bank; certainly not, 'let us go _to_
the Ilissus.' Nor is ἀγροίκῳ τινὶ σοφίᾳ (p. 329, _fin._), this sort of
'_crude_ philosophy,' but 'an uncourteous (or uncivil) kind of
philosophy,' viz., that which employs itself in giving the lie to
received traditions.
The charming and justly celebrated passage in p. 230, B.--one of the
few in Greek literature that indicate intense feeling for the beauties
of nature--we propose to render as follows, nearly every word being a
_close_ representative of the equivalent Greek:--
'Upon my word, the retreat is a charming one; for not only
is this plane-tree of ample size and height, but the dense
shade of this tall _agnus_ is quite beautiful to behold; in
full flower too, so as to make the place most fragrant! Yon
spring, also, is most grateful, that flows from under the
plane-tree with a stream of very cold water, as one may
judge by the feeling to the foot. Moreover, there appears,
from the images and ornaments, to be a shrine here to
certain Nymphs and to the Achelöus. Pray notice, also, the
balmy air of the place, how delightful and exceeding sweet,
and how it rings with the shrill summer chirp of the chorus
of cicadas! But the quaintest thing of all is the growth of
the grass, which on this gentle slope springs up in just
enough abundance for one to recline one's head and be quite
comfortable. So that you have proved a most excellent guide
for a strange visitor, my dear Phædrus.'
Some extra pains might have been fairly bestowed on a passage almost
without rival in Greek literature. But Mr. Jowett gives us the
following bare and clipped paraphrase of it:--
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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