"Miss Valence, I will give you three guineas, although no doubt I shall
be a loser."
"Then don’t give it," said I in pure simplicity.
I went up several steps more. How utterly men of the world are puzzled
by plain truth!
"Miss Valence, if you will forgive the observation, I would beg to
remark that your conversation as well as your painting is crisp. I will
take this little piece at all hazards, because it is full of character.
Will you forgive me for one word of advice?"
"There is nothing to forgive. I shall thank you heartily for it."
"It is simply this:--The worst part of your work is the perspective.
And figure-drawing will be of service to you. Study at a school of
design, if you have one near you; and be not above drawing stiff and
unsightly objects. Houses are the true guides to perspective. I cannot
paint or even draw; but I am so much with great artists, that I know
well how to advise."
"Thank you. Can you kindly suggest anything more?"
"Yes. Your touch is here and there too harsh. Keep your hand light
though bold, and your brush just a leetle wetter. But you have the
grand things quite unattainable, when not in the grain. I mean, of
course, freedom of handling and an artist’s eye."
"Do you think I could do any good in oils?"
"I have no doubt you could, but not for a long time. If fame is your
object, take to oils. If speedy returns, stick to water-colours. Leave
me your address, if you have no objection; and bring me your next work.
If I do well with this, I will try to give you more."
He took from a desk three new sovereigns and three new shillings,
wrapped them neatly in silver paper, and handed them to me. I never
imagined I could be so proud of money.
Light of heart I left the shop, not that I had made my fortune yet, but
what was greater happiness, I thought myself likely to make it.
Soon I perceived, with some alarm, how thick and murky the air had
grown. The fog was stooping heavily down, and was now become like a
wash of gamboge and lamp-black. All the street-lamps were lit, though
they could not see one another, and every shop-keeper had his little
jet. The pavement was no longer slippery, but sticky and dry; and a
cold, that pierced to the bones, was stealing along. Already it had
begun to freeze; and I, so familiar both with white and black frost,
observed with no small interest the grey or fog-frost, which was new to
me. How different from the pure whiteness when the stars are sparkling,
and the earth is gleaming, and the spirit of man so buoyant! This grey
fog-frost is rather depressing to most natures, and a chilly damp creeps
to the core of all things. Thick encrusting rime comes with it, and
sometimes a freezing rain.
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