Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Philosophy
Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
A friend exaggerates a man’s virtues, an enemy inflames his crimes.
_Spectator_, Nº 399.
Would it not be neater to study uniformity instead of variety? as thus:
A friend exaggerates a man’s virtues, an enemy his crimes.
For here the contrast is only betwixt a friend and an enemy; and betwixt
all the other circumstances, including the members of the period, the
resemblance ought to be preserved as entire as possible.
* * * * *
Speaking of a lady’s head-dress:
About ten years ago it shot up to a very great height, insomuch
that the female part of our species were much taller than the men.
_Spectator_, Nº 98.
It should be,
Than the male part.
The wise man is happy when he gains his own approbation; the fool
when he recommends himself to the applause of those about him.
_Ibid._ Nº 73.
Better:
The wise man is happy when he gains his own approbation; the fool
when he gains that of others.
Sicut in frugibus pecudibusque, non tantum semina ad servandum
indolem valent, quantum terræ proprietas cœlique, sub quo aluntur,
mutat.
_Livy, l. 38. § 17._
Sallust, in his history of Catiline’s conspiracy:
Per illa tempora quicumque rempublicam agitavere, honestis
nominibus, alii, sicuti populi jura defenderent, pars, quo senati
auctoritas maxuma foret, bonum publicum simulantes, pro sua
quisque potentia certabant.
_Cap. 38._
We proceed to a rule of a different kind. During the course of a period,
the same scene ought to be continued without variation. The changing
from person to person, from subject to subject, or from person to
subject, within the bounds of a single period, distracts the mind, and
affords no time for a solid impression. I illustrate this rule by giving
examples of deviations from it.
_Honos_ alit artes, _omnesque_ incenduntur ad studia gloriâ;
jacentque _ea_ semper quæ apud quosque improbantur.
_Cicero, Tuscul. quæst. l. 1._
Speaking of the distemper contracted by Alexander bathing in the river
Cydnus and of the cure offered by Philip the physician:
Inter hæc à Parmenione fidissimo purpuratorum, literas _accipit_,
quibus ei _denunciabat_, ne salutem suam Philippo committeret.
_Quintus Curtius, l. 3. cap. 6._
Hook, in his Roman history, speaking of Eumenes, who had been beat down
to the ground with a stone, says,
After a short time _he_ came to himself; and the next day, _they_
put him on board his ship, _which_ conveyed him first to Corinth,
and thence to the island of Ægina.
I give another example of a period which is unpleasant, even by a very
slight deviation from the rule.
That sort of instruction which is acquired by inculcating an
important moral truth, _&c._
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