Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Philosophy
Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
What can be more different as to melody than the two following lines,
which, however, as to the succession of long and short syllables, are
constructed precisely in the same manner?
Spond. Dact. Spond. Spond. Dact. Spond.
Ad talos stola dimissa et circumdata palla. _Hor._
Spond. Dact. Spond. Spond. Dact. Spond.
Placatumque nitet diffuso lumine cœlum. _Lucret._
In the former, the pause falls in the middle of a word, which is a great
blemish, and the accent is disturbed by a harsh elision of the vowel _a_
upon the particle _et_. In the latter the pauses and the accent are all
of them distinct and full: there is no elision: and the words are more
liquid and sounding. In these particulars consists the beauty of an
Hexameter line with respect to melody; and by neglecting these, many
lines in the Satires and Epistles of Horace are less agreeable than
plain prose; for they are neither the one nor the other in perfection.
To make these lines sound, they must be pronounced without relation to
the sense. It must not be regarded, that words are divided by pauses,
nor that harsh elisions are multiplied. To add to the account, prosaic
low sounding words are introduced; and which is still worse, accents are
laid on them. Of such faulty lines take the following instances.
Candida rectaque sit, munda hactenus sit neque longa.
Jupiter exclamat simul atque audirit; at in se
Custodes, lectica, ciniflones, parasitæ
Optimus est modulator, ut Alfenus Vafer omni
Nunc illud tantum quæram, meritone tibi sit.
Next in order comes English heroic verse, which shall be examined under
the whole five heads, of number, quantity, arrangement, pause, and
accent. This verse sometimes employs rhymes and sometimes not, which
distinguishes it into two kinds; one named _metre_, and one _blank
verse_. In the former, the lines are connected two and two by similarity
of sound in the final syllables; and such connected lines are termed
_couplets_. Similarity of sound being avoided in the latter, banishes
couplets. These two sorts must be handled separately, because there are
many peculiarities in each. The first article with respect to rhyme or
metre, shall be discussed in a few words. Every line consists of ten
syllables, five short and five long. There are but two exceptions, both
of them rare. A couplet can bear to be drawn out, by adding a short
syllable at the end of each of the two lines:
There hero’s wits are kept in pond’rous vases,
And beau’s in snuff-boxes and tweezer-cases.
The piece, you think, is incorrect? Why, take it;
I’m all submission; what you’d have it, make it.
This licence is sufferable in a single couplet; but if frequent would
soon become disgustful.
The other exception concerns the second line of a couplet, which is
sometimes stretched out to twelve syllables, termed an _Alexandrine
line_.
A needless Alexandrine ends the song,
That, like a wounded snake, drags its slow length along.
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