Graham's Magazine, Vol. XIX, No. 6, December 1841Various
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Graham's Magazine, Vol. XIX, No. 6, December 1841
Various
Literature -- Periodicals; Literature, Modern -- 19th century -- Periodicals
of demonstrating. Happily the day has gone by, and we trust forever,
when men are content to swear blindly by the words of a master,
poet-laureate though he be. But what Southey says of the poem is at best
an opinion and no more. What Miss Sedgwick says of it is very much in
the same predicament. “Amir Khan,” she writes, “has long been before the
public, but we think it has suffered from a general and very natural
distrust of precocious genius. The versification is graceful, the story
beautifully developed, and the orientalism well sustained. _We think it
would not have done discredit to our most popular poets in the meridian
of their fame; as the production of a girl of fifteen it seems
prodigious._” The cant of a kind heart when betraying into error a
naturally sound judgment, is perhaps the only species of cant in the
world not altogether contemptible.
We yield to no one in warmth of admiration for the personal character of
these sweet sisters, as that character is depicted by the mother, by
Miss Sedgwick, and by Mr. Irving. But it costs us no effort to
distinguish that which, in our heart, is love of their worth, from that
which, in our intellect, is appreciation of their poetic ability. With
the former, as critic, we have nothing to do. The distinction is one too
obvious for comment; and its observation would have spared us much
twaddle on the part of the commentators upon “Amir Khan.”
We will endeavor to convey, as concisely as possible, some idea of this
poem as it exists, not in the fancy of the enthusiastic, but in fact. It
includes four hundred and forty lines. The metre is chiefly
octo-syllabic: At one point it is varied by a casual introduction of an
anapæst in the first and second foot; at another (in a song) by seven
stanzas of four lines each, rhyming alternately; the metre anapæstic of
four feet alternating with three. The versification is always good, so
far as the meagre written rules of our English prosody extend; that is
to say, there is seldom a syllable too much or too little; but long and
short syllables are placed at random, and a crowd of consonants
sometimes renders a line unpronounceable. For example:
He loved,—and oh, he loved so well
_That sorrow scarce dared break the spell_.
At times, again, the rhythm lapses, in the most inartistical manner, and
evidently without design, from one species to another altogether
incongruous; as, for example, in the sixth line of these eight, where
the tripping anapæstic stumbles into the demure iambic, recovering
itself, even more awkwardly, in the conclusion:
Bright Star of the Morning! this bosom is cold—
I was forced from my native shade,
And I wrapped me around with my mantle’s fold,
A sad, mournful Circassian maid!
And I then vow’d that rapture should never move
_This changeless cheek, this rayless eye_,
And I then vowed to feel neither bliss nor love,
_But I vowed I would meet thee and die_.
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