Graham's Magazine, Vol. XX, No. 3, March 1842Various
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Graham's Magazine, Vol. XX, No. 3, March 1842
Various
Literature -- Periodicals; Literature, Modern -- 19th century -- Periodicals
The volume before us (in whose outward appearance the keen “taste” of
genius is evinced with nearly as much precision as in its internal soul)
includes, with several brief original pieces, a translation from the
Swedish of Tegnér. In attempting (what never should be attempted) a
literal version of both the words and the metre of this poem, Professor
Longfellow has failed to do justice either to his author or himself. He
has striven to do what no man ever did well and what, from the nature of
language itself, never _can_ be well done. Unless, for example, we shall
come to have an influx of _spondees_ in our English tongue, it will
always be impossible to construct an English hexameter. Our spondees,
or, we should say, our spondaic words, are rare. In the Swedish they are
nearly as abundant as in the Latin and Greek. We have only “_compound_,”
“_context_,” “_footfall_,” and a few other similar ones. This is the
difficulty; and that it _is_ so will become evident upon reading “The
Children of the Lord’s Supper,” where the sole _readable_ verses are
those in which we meet with the rare spondaic dissyllables. We mean to
say _readable as Hexameters_; for many of them will read very well as
mere English Dactylics with certain irregularities.
But within the narrow compass now left us we must not indulge in
anything like critical comment. Our readers will be better satisfied
perhaps with a few brief extracts from the original poems of the
volume—which we give for their rare excellence, without pausing now to
say in what particulars this excellence exists.
And, like the water’s flow
Under December’s snow
Came a dull voice of woe,
From the heart’s chamber.
So the loud laugh of scorn,
Out of those lips unshorn
From the deep drinking-horn
Blew the foam lightly.
As with his wings aslant
Sails the fierce cormorant
Seeking some rocky haunt,
With his prey laden,
So toward the open main,
Beating to sea again,
Through the wild hurricane,
Bore I the maiden.
Down came the storm and smote amain
The vessel in its strength;
She shuddered and paused like a frighted steed
Then leaped her cable’s length.
She drifted a dreary wreck,
And a whooping billow swept the crew
Like icicles from her deck.
He hears the parson pray and preach,
He hears his daughter’s voice,
Singing in the village choir,
And it makes his heart rejoice.
It sounds to him like her mother’s voice
Singing in Paradise!
He needs must think of her once more
How in the grave she lies;
And with his hard rough hand he wipes
A tear out of his eyes.
Thus at the flaming forge of life
Our fortunes must be wrought;
Thus on its sounding anvil shaped
Each burning deed and thought.
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