Graham's Magazine, Vol. XXXVI, No. 1, January 1850Various
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Graham's Magazine, Vol. XXXVI, No. 1, January 1850
Various
Literature -- Periodicals; Literature, Modern -- 19th century -- Periodicals
The blemishes in the paragraph about Byron are more negative than those
in the paragraph about Southey. The first sentence needs vivacity. The
adjective “opposite” is superfluous:—so is the particle “there.” The
second and third sentences are, properly, one. “Some” would fully supply
the place of “something of.” The whole phrase “which he possessed over
others,” is supererogatory. “Was sprung,” in place of “sprang,” is
altogether unjustifiable. The triple repetition of “and,” in the fourth
sentence, is awkward. “Notorious crimes and follies,” would express all
that is implied in “crimes and follies which had attained a scandalous
publicity.” The fifth sentence might be well curtailed; and as it
stands, has an unintentional and unpleasant sneer. “Intellect” would do
as well as “intellectual powers;” and this (the sixth) sentence might
otherwise be shortened advantageously. The whole paragraph, in my
opinion, would be better thus expressed:
In Lord Byron’s rank, understanding, character—even in his person—we
find a strange union of extremes. Whatever men covet and admire, became
his by right of birth; yet debasement and misery were mingled with each
of his eminent advantages. He sprang from a house, ancient it is true,
and noble, but degraded and impoverished by a series of notorious
crimes. But for merciful judges, the pauper kinsman whom he succeeded
would have been hanged. The young peer had an intellect great, perhaps,
yet partially unsound. His heart was generous, but his temper wayward;
and while statuaries copied his head, beggars mimicked the deformity of
his foot.
In these remarks, my object is not so much to point out inaccuracies in
the most accurate stylist of his age, as to hint that our critics might
surpass him on his own ground, and yet leave themselves something to
learn in the moralities of manner.
Nothing can be plainer than that our position, as a literary colony of
Great Britain, leads us into wronging, indirectly, our own authors by
exaggerating the merits of those across the water. Our most reliable
critics extol—and extol without discrimination—such English
compositions as, if written in America, would be either passed over
without notice or unscrupulously condemned. Mr. Whipple, for example,
whom I have mentioned in this connection with Mr. Jones is decidedly one
of our most “reliable” critics. His honesty I dispute as little as I
doubt his courage or his talents—but here is an instance of the want of
common discrimination into which he is occasionally hurried, by undue
reverence for British intellect and British opinion. In a review of “The
Drama of Exile and Other Poems” by Miss Barrett, (now Mrs. Browning,) he
speaks of the following passage as “in every respect
faultless—sublime:”
Hear the steep generations how they fall
Adown the visionary stairs of Time,
Like supernatural thunders—far yet near,
Sowing their fiery echoes through the hills!
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