African Americans -- Louisiana -- Gretna -- Fiction; Short stories, American
The commanding tone of his voice and the spectacular batting of his
eyelids brought immediate silence. Whereupon he called out vehemently:
“Number twenny-two!”
“Twenny-two blank like de yuther one,” Bennee answered with a tone of
apparent surprise.
“You already done forgot w’at I tol’ you?” Duckery grumbled, fixing him
with a menacing stare, before taking another slip from the hat.
“Number ninety-nine,” he boomed, looking at Bennee steadily.
“Dis’n ain’ blank!” Bennee called out joyfully. “Dis’n got somh’n wrote
’cross it, diffunt from all de yuther ones.”
“Number ninety-nine de prize!” Broke forth the excited chorus of soprano
voices.... “Who number ninety-nine is, Carmelite?” they questioned.
“Ninety-nine done win de quilt.... Innybody hyuh got ninety-nine for dey
number?” They babbled. “Who ever ’tis picked ninety-nine for dey number,
sho is lucky. Ain’t dey?” The comment went on; until Carmelite brought
the list of names and looked to see whose name was written after the
winning number.
“Lawd, people!” She exclaimed with delight. “Aun’ Fisky de one done win
de quilt.... An’ I ain’ sorry, either. Bad as she needin’ cov’rins w’en
de col’ weather come up on ’uh.”
“Some people sho is lucky,” declared Lethe.
“Not me,” Frozine informed her. “I ain’ never win nothin’ in my whole
life.... An’ hyuh I comed thoo all dis mud an’ rain to witness Carmelite
fine Jacob-ladder quilt go ’way from hyuh to lay ’cross somebody else
bed.... Umph!”
“Who?” commented Pinkey, sympathetically. “You ain’ need to grumble....
De onles’ thing I ever win, was a li’l can o’ cundense milk one time....
Sho’ ’nough. No playin’,” she went on, trying to convince them in spite
of their laughter “’Twus to a singin’ cawntes’ at de Red Bean Row, yonder
in Freetown.... An’ w’en I got home an’ went to open de cundense milk; de
thing had done turn so sour, I was compel to th’ow it away.”
Becoming impatient over the long delay and the amusing gossip of the
women, Duckery asked them:
“Y’all goin’ stay hyuh an’ talk all night ’bout bad luck; an’ tell
each-another ’bout all de things you done los’?... If evvything done
finish, I’m goin’ th’ow dese papers out my hat an’ go ’way from hyuh.”
Carmelite took his hat and told him to wait. She had a little surprise
for everybody. She had a nice cake she made for the occasion, and she
wanted each one to have a piece of cake and some coffee “to console dey
feelin’s for not winnin’ de quilt.” Then afterwards, they could all go to
the wake together.
The announcement brought a smile to every face. Dink began playing on the
comb with renewed animation; and the room buzzed with merry laughter and
friendly chatter as Carmelite went back to get the refreshments.
Going into the kitchen in a happy frame of mind, she called to Gussie
cheerfully:
“Who you reckon had de lucky number to win de quilt, Gussie?”
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