Ciudad Juárez (Mexico) -- Fiction; El Paso (Tex.) -- Fiction; Prostitutes -- Fiction
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"Negro Noche wasn't even arrested--the
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across the border." said Evelyn.
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"Hey, you two," as she shook them. "Come on--come
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sat down beside her. "I'll call
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this time," asked one of the officials.
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"We tried to get a taxi
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shot anyone she found with him."
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those 75's," commanded the General
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"At your command, I have come, Senor," said
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officers. "You can't cross that river."
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don't you call me again," as he
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Evelyn turned over and opened her eyes. "What's
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revolution, Mickey?" asked Evelyn."
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"Sure, did you?'
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"Sure, darling," I'll go any place
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"Sure," answered Pearl.
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"Sure," answered Evelyn,
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