To express a profound emotion, the simpler the language and the less
removed from the ordinary course of life the better. There is a very
striking example of this in Webster’s tragedy of “The Duchess of
Malfy.” The brother of the Duchess has procured her murder, and when he
comes in and sees the body he merely says:
“Cover her face; mine eyes dazzle; she died young.”
Horror could not be better expressed than in these few words, and
Webster has even taken care to break up the verse in such a way that a
too entire consciousness of the metre may not thrust itself between us
and the bare emotion he intends to convey.
In illustration, Mr. Lowell quoted from Shakspeare (“Henry V”),
Marlowe, Chapman, Dunbar, Beaumont and Fletcher, Waller, Young, and
Cawthorn.
These men [the poets of the eighteenth century] were perfectly
conscious of the fact that poetry is not produced under an ordinary
condition of the mind, and accordingly, when they begin to grind their
barrel-organs, they go through the ceremony of invoking the Muse, talk
in the blandest way of divine rages and sacred flames, and one thing
or another, and ask for holy fire to heat their little tea-urns with
as coolly as one would borrow a lucifer. They appeal ceremoniously to
the “sacred Nine,” when the only thing really necessary to them was the
ability to count as high as the sacred ten syllables that constituted
their verse. If the Muse had once granted their prayer, if she _had_
once unveiled her awful front to the poor fellows, they would have
hidden under their beds, every man John of them.
The eighteenth century produced some true poets, but almost all, even
of them, were infected by the prevailing style. I cannot find any
name that expresses it better than the “Dick Swiveller style.” As Dick
always called wine the “rosy,” sleep the “balmy,” and so forth, so
did these perfectly _correct_ gentlemen always employ either a fluent
epithet or a diffuse paraphrasis to express the commonest emotions or
ideas. If they wished to say _tea_ they would have done it thus:
Of China’s herb the infusion hot and mild.
Coffee would be
The fragrant juice of Mocha’s kernel gray,
or brown or black, as the rhyme demanded. A boot is dignified into
The shining leather that the leg encased.
Wine is
The purple honor of th’ ambrosial vine.
All women are “nymphs,” carriages are “harnessed pomps,” houses are
sumptuous or humble “piles,” as the case may be, and everything is
purely technical. Of nature there seems to have been hardly a tradition.
But instead of attempting to describe in prose the diluent diction
which passed for poetic under the artificial system--which the
influence of Wordsworth did more than anything else to abolish and
destroy--I will do it by a few verses in the same style. Any subject
will do--a Lapland sketch, we will say:
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