Chapter 19: missing end quotation mark added to "Our escort. Commissioner Tate made very sure we had one, too!" "you" changed to "your" Chapter 20: "amensia" changed to "amnesia" (3 times) missing end quotation mark added to "All right--what's this?" "unmollifed" changed to "unmollified" Chapter 21: missing period added after "Pluly's" Chapter 22: period changed to comma after "Lyad said" "agin" changed to "again" missing period added after "Lyad" Chapter 24: "appologizing" changed to "apologizing" "Blamordan" changed to "Balmordan" "OradoComWeb" changed to "Orado ComWeb" Chapter 25: period changed to question mark after "Who'd hesitate" missing comma added after "jerk" Chapter 26: "Lusscious" changed to "Luscious" "then" changed to "than" "like" changed to "liked" "plasmoids's" changed to "plasmoid's" "turbulance" changed to "turbulence" Chapter 27: "suprisingly" changed to "surprisingly" "Commisioner" changed to "Commissioner" Chapter 28: "someboy" changed to "somebody" "clingling" changed to "clinging"