Ballads, Spanish; Legends -- Spain; Spanish literature -- History and criticism
"The Lady of the Tree" tells how a princess was stolen by the fairies,
and how a knight to whom she appealed for rescue turned a deaf ear
to her request and was afterward scorned by her when she returned
to her rightful station. "The False Queen" is a mere fragment, but
"The Avenging Childe" is both complete and vivid. Mr Fitzmaurice
Kelly declares that Gibson's version of this ballad is superior to
that of Lockhart. Let us compare a verse of both.
Avoid that knife in battle strife, that weapon short and thin;
The dragon's gore hath bath'd it o'er, seven times 'twas steeped
therein;
Seven times the smith hath proved its pith, it cuts a coulter
through--
In France the blade was fashioned, from Spain the shaft it drew.
Gibson renders this:
'Tis a right good spear with a point so sharp, the toughest
plough-share might pierce.
For seven times o'er it was tempered fine in the blood of a
dragon fierce,
And seven times o'er it was whetted keen, till it shone with a
deadly glance,
For its steel was wrought in the finest forge, in the realm of
mighty France.
My preference is for Lockhart's rendering. Gibson's first line is
extraordinarily clumsy and cacophonous, and the ugly inversions in
the second line could scarcely be tolerated outside the boundaries of
the nursery. The remaining lines are well enough, but no improvement,
I think, upon those of Lockhart, only the whole has a better swing,
a livelier lilt, even if in the first line this is roughened by the
crudity occasioned by the juxtaposition of so many sibilants and
explosives. The Avenging Childe duly accounts for his enemy.
Right soon that knife hath quenched his life--the head is
sundered sheer,
Then gladsome smiled the Avenging Childe, and fix'd it on his
spear.
Pity it is that a sense of humour seldom chimes with a sense of the
romantic. An 'avenging childe' who could smile gladly when fixing the
head of a foe on his spear seems more fitted for a Borstal institution
than for the silken atmosphere of Courts. Yet he married the Infanta,
and was knighted and honoured by the King. Possibly they found in
him a kindred soul, if all we read in romance regarding kings and
infantas be true.
Count Arnaldos
This very beautiful ballad, which is given in the Cancionero of
Antwerp (1555), tells how Count Arnaldos, wandering by the seashore
one morning, hears the mystic song of a sailor in a passing galley.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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