Life of John Keats: His Life and Poetry, His Friends, Critics and After-FameColvin, Sidney
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Life of John Keats: His Life and Poetry, His Friends, Critics and After-Fame
Colvin, Sidney
Keats, John, 1795-1821; Poets, English -- 19th century -- Biography
[1] Why will my friend Professor Saintsbury, in range of reading and
industry the master of us all, insist on trying to persuade us that
in the metre of _Endymion_ Keats owed something to the _Pharonnida_
of William Chamberlayne? There is absolutely no metrical usage in
Keats's poem for which his familiar Elizabethan and Jacobean masters
do not furnish ample precedent: he differs from them only in taking
more special care to avoid any prolonged run of closed couplets. I do
not believe he could have brought himself to read two pages of
_Pharonnida_. But that is only an opinion, and the matter can be
decided by a simple computation on the fingers. The fact is that
there are no five pages of _Pharonnida_ which do not contain more of
those unfortunate rimings on 'in' and 'by' and 'to' and 'on' and 'of'
followed by their nouns in the next line, or worse still, on 'to'
followed by its infinitive,--on 'it' and 'than' and 'be' and 'which,'
and all the featherweight particles and prepositions and auxiliaries
and relatives impossible to stress or pause on for a moment,--than
can be found in any whole book of _Endymion_. It is also a fact that
the average proportion of lines not ending with a comma or other
pause is in _Pharonnida_ about ten to one, and in _Endymion_ not more
than two and a half to one. That the sentence-structure of
_Pharonnida_ is as detestably disjointed and invertebrate as that of
_Endymion_ is graceful and well-articulated I hesitate to insist,
because that again is a matter of ear and feeling, and not, like my
other points, of sheer arithmetic.
[2] The flaw here is of course the use of the forced rime-word
'unseam.' The only authority for the word is Shakespeare, who uses it
in _Macbeth_, in a sufficiently different sense and context--
'Till he unseam'd him from the nave to the chaps.'
The vision in Keats's mind was probably of a track dividing, or as it
were ripping apart, the two sides of a valley.
[3] 'All the strange, mysterious and unaccountable sounds which were
heard in solitary places, were attributed to Pan, the God of rural
scenery' (Baldwin's _Pantheon_, ed. 1806, p. 104). Keats possessed a
copy of this well-felt and well-written little primer of mythology,
by William Godwin the philosopher writing under the pseudonym Edward
Baldwin; and the above is only one of several suggestions directly
due to it which are to be found in his poetry.
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