American essays; Literature -- History and criticism
Nothing can make up in a writer for the want of lucidity. It is one
of the cardinal literary virtues. If the page is not clear, if we see
through it as through a glass darkly, if there is the least blur or
opacity, the work to that extent is condemned. It is a false notion
that some thoughts or ideas are necessarily obscure, or complex, or
involved. Ideas are what we make them. If we think obscurely, our
ideas are obscure; if one’s mental activity is complex, his ideas are
complex. Always is the mind of the writer the medium through which we
see his matter. Such a poet as George Meredith thinks obscurely. There
is a large blind spot in his mind, so that at times an almost total
eclipse passes over his page. Strain one’s vision as one may, one
cannot make out just what he is trying to say. Then there are lucid
intervals--strong, telling lines; then the shadow falls again and the
reader is groping in the dark. The difficulty is never innate in his
subject, but is in the poet’s use of language, as if at times he caught
at words blindly and used them without reference to their accepted
meanings, as when be says of the skylark, “He _drinks_ his hurried
flight and drops.” How can one adjust his mind to the notion of a bird
drinking its own flight?
Or take this puzzle:--
“Vermilion wings, by distance held
To pause aflight while fleeting swift,
And high aloft the pearl inshelled
Her lucid glow in glow will lift.”
Does not the reading of such lines set one’s head in a whirl?
The impression of novelty can never be made by a trick in the use
of language, nor can the sense of mystery be given by obscurity of
expression. Veils and screens and dim lights may do it in the world of
sense, but not in the world of ideas. The reader feels all the time
that there is something in the way, and that he would see clearly if
the writer thought clearly. Freshness and novelty are the gifts of the
writer whose mind is fresh and who has lively and novel emotions in the
presence of everyday things and events.
There is a sense of mystery in much of the poetry of Wordsworth and
Tennyson, and in our own Emerson and Whitman, but little or none
of the Meredithian blur and opacity. One may not at once catch the
full meaning of Wordsworth’s “Ode to Immortality,” or Tennyson’s
“Tiresias” or “Ancient Sage,” or Emerson’s “Brahma,” or Whitman’s
“Sleep Chasings,” but how transparent the language, how unequivocal
the emotion, how direct and solid the expression! There is a vast
difference between the impression or want of impression made by a
commonplace thought veiled and hidden by ambiguity of phrase, and
that made by “something far more deeply interfused, whose dwelling is
the light of setting suns.” Great poets give us a sense of depth and
height, of the far and the rare. Meredith does at times, but oftener he
gives us only a sense of the dense and the foggy.
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