He laughed like a wild-man, and they all laughed with him and someone
put a clove cigarette between his lips and he drew on it, coughed a
little, and then had another drag before he rolled into the elevator.
The girls put him to bed hours later. His apartment had been spotless
and he had every confidence that it would be spotless again come
night-time. The party had spent the rest of the day and most of the
night talking about the story that they'd seen in the ride, where
they'd seen it, what it meant. There was a lot of debate about whether
they had any business rating things now that the story had shown
itself to them. The story was the product of unconscious effort, and
it should be left to unconscious effort.
But the counter-argument was that they had a duty to garden the story,
or possibly to sharpen its telling, or to protect it from people who
couldn't see it or wouldn't see it.
At first Death didn't know what to make of all this talk. At first he
found it funny and more than a little weird to be taking the story
this seriously. It was beautiful, but it was an accidental beauty. The
ride was the important thing, the story was its effect.
But these people convinced him that they were right, that the story
*had* to be important. After all, it had inspired all of them, hadn't
it? The ride was just technology -- the story was what the ride was
*for*.
His head swam with it.
"We've got to protect it," he said finally, after listening to the
argument, after eating the food with which they'd filled his fridge,
after talking intensely with Tracey (or possibly Lacey) about their
parents' unthinking blandness, after letting the English teacher guy
(whose name was Jim) take him to the toilet, after letting his old
goth pals play some music some mutual friends had just mixed.
"We've got to protect it and sharpen it. The story wants to get out
and there will be those who can't see it." He didn't care that his
speech was mangled by his fucked-up face. He'd seen his face in the
mirror and Tracey and Lacey had done a nice job in making it up -- he
looked like a latter-day Marilyn Manson, his twisted mouth a ghoulish
smear. The doctors had talked about giving him another series of
surgeries to fix his lip, a set of implanted dentures to replace the
missing teeth, had even mentioned that there were specialist clinics
where he could get a new set budded and grown right out of his own
gums. That had been back when the mysterious forces of the lawsuit and
the ride were paying his bills.
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