Memoirs of the Life of Sir Walter Scott, Volume 5 (of 10)Lockhart, J. G. (John Gibson)
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Memoirs of the Life of Sir Walter Scott, Volume 5 (of 10)
Lockhart, J. G. (John Gibson)
Authors, Scottish -- 19th century -- Biography; Scott, Walter, 1771-1832
_Scott._--I answer, it did _not_,--because the observation relates
to the strength of those actually engaged, and when _their_ strength
was exhausted, other squadrons were brought up. Suppose you saw two
lawyers scolding at the bar, you might say this must have an
end--human lungs cannot hold out--but, if the debate were continued
by the senior counsel, your well-grounded expectations would be
disappointed--"Cousin, thou wert not wont to be so dull!"--
IBID.--"Nor ceased the _intermitted_ shot."
_James._--Mr. Erskine contends that "intermitted" is redundant.
_Scott._--"Nor ceased the _storm of shell and shot_."
STANZA X.--"---- Never shall our country say
We gave one inch of ground away,
_When battling_ for her right."
_James._--_In conflict?_
_John B._--_Warring?_ I am afraid _battling_ must stand.
_Scott._--All worse than the text.
STANZA XI.--"Peal'd wildly the imperial name."
_James._--I submit with diffidence whether this be not a somewhat
tame conclusion to so very animated a stanza? And, at any rate, you
will observe, that as it stands, you have no rhyme whatever to "The
Cohort eagles _fly_."--You have no rhyme to _fly_. _Flew_ and _fly_,
also, are perhaps too near, considering that each word closes a line
of the same sort. I don't well like "_Thus_ in a torrent," either.
If it were, "In one broad torrent," etc., it strikes me that it
would be more spirited.
_Scott._--Granted as to most of these observations--Read, "in one
_dark_ torrent broad and strong," etc.--The "imperial name" is
_true_, therefore must stand.
STANZA XII.--"Nor was one forward footstep _stopped_."
_James._--This staggering word was intended, I presume, but I don't
like it.
{p.074} _Scott._--Granted. Read _staid_, etc.
IBID.--"Down were the eagle banners sent,
Down, down the horse and horsemen went."
_James._--This is very spirited and very fine; but it is
unquestionably liable to the charge of being very nearly a direct
repetition of yourself. See _Lord of the Isles_, Canto vi. Stanza
24:--
"_Down! down!_ in headlong overthrow,
_Horseman and horse_, the foremost go," etc.
This passage is at once so striking and so recent, that its close
similarity to the present, if not indeed its identity, must strike
every reader; and really, to borrow from one's self is hardly much
better than to borrow from one's neighbors. And yet again, a few lines
lower--
"As hammers on the _anvils_ reel,
Against the cuirass _clangs_ the steel."
See _Lady of the Lake_, Canto vi. Stanza 18:--
"I heard the broadswords' deadly _clang_,
As if an hundred _anvils_ rang."
Here is precisely the same image, in very nearly the same words.
_Scott._--I have altered the expression, but made a note, which, I
think, will vindicate my retaining the simile.
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