[_Song._] Sir Egerton thought this (which, by the
way, Lovelace may have seen, or _vice versa_) 'a very elegant
little song, with all the harmony of _modern_ rhythm'.
One might perhaps substitute 'with more of the harmony of
_contemporary_ rhythm than Stanley always attains'. It is
certainly much better than _The Cure_. The bracketed stanza
was dropped in _1651_, but it seemed better to restore it
thus in text than to degrade it hither. One or two extremely
unimportant misprints occur in one or other version, but are
not worth noting.]
_The Sick Lover._
GUARINI.
My sickly breath
Wastes in a double flame;
Whilst Love and Death
To my poor life lay claim;
The fever, in whose heat I melt,
By her that causeth it not felt.
Thou who alone
Canst, yet wilt grant no ease,
Why slight'st thou one
To feed a new disease? 10
Unequal fair! the heart is thine;
Ah, why then should the pain be mine?
[_The Sick Lover._] Not a great thing. In l. 6, Miss
Guiney thinks 'it', which is in all texts, should be 'is'. But
'it' is wanted and 'is' is not. 'The fever not [_being_] felt'
is no excessively 'absolute' construction.]
_Song._
Celinda, by what potent art
Or unresisted charm,
Dost thou thine ear and frozen heart
Against my passion arm?
Or by what hidden influence
Of powers in one combin'd,
Dost thou rob Love of either sense,
Made deaf as well as blind?
Sure thou, as friends, united hast
Two distant Deities; 10
And scorn within thy heart hast plac'd,
And love within thine eyes.
Or those soft fetters of thy hair,
A bondage that disdains
All liberty, do guard thine ear
Free from all other chains.
Then my complaint how canst thou hear,
Or I this passion fly,
Since thou imprison'd hast thine ear,
And not confin'd thine eye? 20
[_Song--Celinda, &c._] Again, mere commonplace
common measure. '_Those_ soft fetters of thy hair' (l. 13) is
at least as good as 'mobled queen', but otherwise the phrase
rather sinks to the measure. 'friends' (l. 9) is misprinted
'friend' in _1647_, and Sir Egerton has mispunctuated 'friends
united'.]
_Song._
Fool, take up thy shaft again;
If thy store
Thou profusely spend in vain,
Who can furnish thee with more?
Throw not then away thy darts
On impenetrable hearts.
Think not thy pale flame can warm
Into tears,
Or dissolve the snowy charm
Which her frozen bosom wears, 10
That expos'd, unmelted lies
To the bright suns of her eyes.
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