Built rank-and-file like beadsmen's rooms,
And what they bleed but tart and sour
Matched with my Danae's golden shower,
Live-honey all,--the envious elf
Stung her, 'cause sweeter than himself. 80
Sweetness and she are so allied
The bee committed parricide.
[_Fuscara._ (_1651_.) Cleveland's most famous poem
of the amatory, as _The Rebel Scot_ is of the political, kind.
In _1677_ and since it has been set in the forefront of his
_Poems_, and Johnson draws specially on it for his famous
diatribe against the metaphysicals in the 'Life of Cowley'. It
seems to me inferior both to _The Muses' Festival_ and to
_The Antiplatonic_, and, as was said in the Introduction, it
betrays, to me, something of an intention to fool the lovers
of a fashionable style to the top of their bent. But it has
extremely pretty things in it; and Mr. Addison, who denounced
and scorned 'false wit', never 'fair-sexed it' in half so
poetical a manner.]
[Line: 2 'Suckets' or 'succades' should need interpretation
to no reader of _Robinson Crusoe_: and no one who has not read
_Robinson Crusoe_ deserves to be taken into consideration.]
[Line: 13 tincture] Said to be used here in an alchemical
sense for 'gold'. But the plain meaning is much better.]
[Line: 18 Although the sense is not quite the same as, it is
much akin to, that of Browning's question--
'Who knows but the world may end to night?'
]
[Line: 20 Cleveland of course uses the correct and not the
modern and blundering sense of 'transpire'.]
[Line: 22 This 'jelly gloved' is _not_ like 'mobled queen' or
'calcining flame'.]
[Lines: 25-6 _1653_ and its group have a queer misprint
(carried out so as to rhyme, but hardly possible as a true
reading) of 'dives' and 'lives'. If they had had 'In' instead
of 'On' it would have been on the (metaphysical) cards,
especially with 'bathes' following.]
[Line: 28 _1653_, less well, '_the_ nectar'.]
[Line: 30 Neat, i' faith!]
[Line: 33 'a lovely _brown_' as being _Fuscara_.]
[Line: 35 Here Cleveland dares his 'ill armoury again'; _v.
sup._, p. 25. 'He' _1651_, _1653_: 'Her' _1677_.]
[Line: 48 as] _1677_, unnecessarily, 'like'. Some (baddish)
editions '_on_ a bracelet'.]
[Line: 52 Hardly necessary to notice as another of Cleveland's
Shakespearian touches.]
[Line: 62 The correcter form is 'lancep_e_sade'.]
[Line: 70 '_Ratillias_' _1651_: '_Ratilias_' _1653_: corrected
in _1677_.]
[Line: 71 _1677_, dropping the verb from 'now's', improves the
sense very much.]
*An Elegy upon Doctor Chad[d]erton, the first Master of Emanuel
College in Cambridge, being above an hundred years old when he died.
(_Occasioned by his long-deferred funeral._)
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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