American poetry -- 19th century; American poetry -- 20th century
Hilda began to write poems—or rather, to talk them—at the age of
four. Since that time, she has created one hundred and fifty little
verses, many of them astonishing in exactness of phrase and beauty
of vision. Hilda “tells” her poem and her mother copies it down,
arranges the line-divisions and reads it to the child for
correction. Conceding a possible half-conscious shaping by Mrs.
Conkling, the quality which shines behind all of Hilda’s little
facets of loveliness is a straightforward ingenuousness, a childlike
but sweeping fantasy.
_Poems by a Little Girl_ (1920), published when Hilda was a little
more than nine years old, is a detailed proof of this delightful
quality. Every poem bears its own stamp of unaffected originality;
“Water,” “Hay-Cock,” and a dozen others are startling in their
precision and a power of painting the familiar in unsuspected
colors. This child not only sees, feels and hears with the
concentration of a child-artist, she communicates the results of her
perceptions with the sensitivity of a master-craftsman. She hears a
chickadee talking
The way smooth bright pebbles
Drop into water.
Everything is extraordinarily vivid and fanciful to her keen senses.
The rooster’s comb is “gay as a parade;” he has “pearl trinkets on
his feet” and
The short feathers smooth along his back
Are the dark color of wet rocks,
Or the rippled green of ships
When I look at their sides through water.
She observes:
The water came in with a wavy look
Like a spider’s web.
It is too early for judgments—even for a prophecy. It is impossible
to guess how much Hilda’s vision will be distorted by knowledge and
the traditions that will accompany her growth. One can only hold
one’s breath and hope for the preservation of so remarkable a
talent.
WATER
The world turns softly
Not to spill its lakes and rivers.
The water is held in its arms
And the sky is held in the water.
What is water,
That pours silver,
And can hold the sky?
HAY-COCK
This is another kind of sweetness
Shaped like a bee-hive:
This is the hive the bees have left,
It is from this clover-heap
They took away the honey
For the other hive!
THE OLD BRIDGE
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