cause us to think that Lord de Tabley has paid but little attention to
the question of elision in English poetry. In the second of the lines
above quoted elision is impossible, in the first elision is demanded.
The reason why elision is sometimes demanded is that in certain lines, as
in the one which opens ‘Orpheus in Hades,’ the hiatus which occurs when a
word ending with a vowel is followed by a vowel beginning the next word
may be so great as to become intolerable. The reason why elision is
sometimes a merely allowable beauty is that when a word ends with _w_,
_r_, or _l_, to elide the liquids is to secure a kind of billowy music of
a peculiarly delightful kind. Now elision is very specially demanded in
a line like that which opens ‘Orpheus in Hades,’ where the pause of the
line fall upon _the_. To make the main pause of the line fall upon _the_
is extremely and painfully bad, even when the next word begins with a
consonant; but when the word following _the_ begins with a vowel, the
line is absolutely immetrical; it has, indeed, no more to do with English
prosody than with that prosody of Japan upon which Mr. Basil Chamberlain
discourses so pleasantly. On the other hand, the elision of the second
syllable of the word _music_ in the other line quoted above is equally
faulty in another direction. But as we said when reviewing Mr. Bridges’s
treatise on Milton’s prosody, nothing is more striking than the
helplessness of most recent poets when confronted with the simple
question of elision.
In an ‘Ode to a Star’ there is great beauty and breadth of thought and
expression. Its only structural blemish, that of an opening stanza whose
form is not distinctly followed, can be so easily put right that it need
only be mentioned here in order to emphasize the canon that it is only in
irregular odes that variation of stanza is permissible. Keats, no doubt,
in one at least of his unequalled odes, does depart from the scheme of
structure indicated by the opening stanza, and without any apparent
metrical need for so doing. But the poem does not gain by the departure.
Besides, Keats is now a classic, and has a freedom in regard to
irregularities of metre which Lord de Tabley would be the last to claim
for himself. Another blemish of a minor kind in the ‘Ode to a Star’ is
that of rhyming “meteor” with “wheatear.”
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