Wilde, Oscar, 1854-1900 -- Criticism and interpretation
These pieces of evidence must be remembered when we consider the
composition of _Salome_. Mr. Ross says: "The play was passed for press
by no less a writer than Marcel Schwob, whose letter to the Paris
publisher, returning the proofs and mentioning two or three slight
alterations, is still in my possession. Marcel Schwob told me some years
afterwards that he thought it would have spoiled the spontaneity and
character of Wilde's style if he had tried to harmonize it with the
diction demanded by the French Academy." M. Merrill says: "Un jour Wilde
me remit son drame qu'il avait ecrit tres rapidement, de premier jet, en
francais, et me demanda d'en corriger les erreurs manifestes. Ce ne fut
pas chose facile de faire accepter a Wilde toutes mes corrections.... Je
me rappelle que la plupart des tirades de ses personnages commencaient
par l'expletif: _enfin!_ En ai-je assez biffe, des _enfin!_ Mais je
m'apercus bientot que le bon Wilde n'avait en mon gout qu'une confiance
relative, et je le recommandai aux soins de Rette. Celui-ci continua mon
travail de correction et d'emendation. Mais Wilde finit par se mefier de
Rette autant que de moi, et ce fut Pierre Louys qui donna le dernier
coup de lime au texte de _Salome_." In comment, I shall do no more than
notice that the play was written in 1891, and not published till 1893.
The two stories do not necessarily contradict each other, for Marcel
Schwob did not suggest that he saw the manuscript, and M. Merrill's
reminiscence is concerned with _Salome_ long before it was sent to the
printers.
The question is not one of any great importance. It is sufficient for
our purpose to observe that the French of _Salome_, whether as Wilde
wrote it or as it survived the emendations of his friends, is very
simple in construction. Salome, daughter of Herodias, Princess of Judaea,
did not use the finer subtleties of the language in which she loved
Iokanaan. A perusal of Maeterlinck's "Les Sept Princesses" had taught
her to use a speech whose power depends on its simplicity. She, Herod,
Herodias and all their entourage, speak like children who have had a
French nurse. Their speech is made of short sentences, direct assertions
and negations, that run like pages beside the progress of the play. They
show, these short sentences, what is happening, the more forcefully,
because they are themselves aloof from it and busied with their own
concerns. For example:--
"_Herode._ Qu'est-ce que cela me fait qu'elle danse ou non? Cela ne
me fait rien. Je suis heureux ce soir. Je suis tres heureux. Jamais
je n'ai ete si heureux.
_Le premier soldat._ Il a l'air sombre, le tetrarque. N'est-ce pas
qu'il a l'air sombre?
_Le second soldat._ Il a l'air sombre."
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