Literature, Modern -- 19th century -- History and criticism
Noguchi’s technique is his own, though it would be possible to find
in reminiscent phrases suggestions of influence. A man using English
words with something of the surprising daring of the Irish peasants
on whose talk Mr. Synge modelled his prose, using them, too, like a
foreigner who has fallen in love with them, he is able to give them a
morning freshness newer and stranger than is given them (though the
words of all fine writers are newly discovered) by men whose ancestors
have bandied them about. He uses them in short and long lines that,
in his later books, learn more and more of rhythm. Rhyme he has not
attempted, and it would, I think, have hampered the butterfly-flash
of his verse from thought to thought. In _The Summer Cloud_ many of
the poems of his early books are altered to prose simply by the plan
of their printing. The type is differently set on the page and they
are called prose poems. I do not know what led Noguchi to make this
experiment, but it proved that the irregular, broken lines in which his
poems were originally published had a real power over the effect the
words produced. The spaces between the lines were a kind of thought
punctuation, and the mind needed these moments between the little,
breathless, scarcely-worded sighs that make his poems. In reading
them aloud it becomes clear that the ritual of the line-spacing was
more important than that of commas or full-stops. Noguchi’s songs are
like bird flights, timing themselves with the pulse of the mind that
follows them. His ideal is a poetry of pure suggestion whose melody
shall be of thought, capricious and uncertain as the mind, but only
with the mind’s caprice, the mind’s uncertainty. The following poem was
printed as prose in _The Summer Cloud_, and as it stands here in _The
Pilgrimage_.
“Little Fairy,
Little Fairy by a hearth,
Flight in thine eyes,
Hush on thy feet,
Shall I go with thee up to Heaven
By the road of the fire-flame?
Little Fairy,
Little Fairy by a river,
Dance in thy heart,
Longing at thy lips,
Shall I go down with thee to “Far-Away,”
Rolling over the singing bubbles?
Little Fairy,
Little Fairy by a poppy,
Dream in thy hair,
Solitude under thy wings,
Shall I sleep with thee to-night in the golden cup
Under the stars?”
It is easy, in reading it aloud, to recognise that its form is not
accidental, but follows, breath for breath, the movements of the mind.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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