Practical English Composition: Book II.: For the Second Year of the High SchoolMiller, Edwin L. (Edwin Lillie)
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Practical English Composition: Book II.: For the Second Year of the High School
Miller, Edwin L. (Edwin Lillie)
English language -- Composition and exercises
Make a similar study of advertisements for a set of books, of chewing
gum, of an automobile, and of a piece of machinery in some technical
publication. Compare results with a similar count in a newspaper
paragraph, an encyclopedia paragraph, and paragraphs from Macaulay,
Dickens, Carlyle, and Kipling.
II. Clearness
Clear, simple language, language that will be readily understood by the
least intelligent of your possible customers, is an essential of good
advertising. Every word that is above the lowest reasonable level of
understanding limits the number of possible customers. The railroad
attorney who was asked to write a notice that would warn people to be
careful at railroad crossings did not dig into his law books for a
polysyllabic sentence like this: "Whereas this is the intersection of a
public highway with the right-of-way of the ---- Railroad Corporation,
each and every individual is hereby advised to exercise extreme
caution." He wrote a sentence which is a classic in its way "Stop! Look!
Listen! Railroad Crossing."
III. Assignment II
In the advertisements selected for Assignment I, count the number of
words in each sentence and strike an average for each. Make a comparison
with sentence length in other writings as suggested.
IV. Adaptation to Audience
The degree to which the simplification of language in an advertisement
should be carried depends upon the audience addressed. It is evident
that a larger and less educated portion of the public is included in the
possible customers for breakfast food and chewing gum than there are in
the portion who would be likely to purchase a set of books. An even
smaller portion of the public would be interested in an automobile or a
piece of automatic machinery. A good advertisement should be framed in
language that will be understood by all possible purchasers of an
article. Many household articles, such as bread, breakfast food, candy,
and confections, are advertised in language that a fourth-grade child
will readily understand.
V. Assignment III
Write an advertisement for an athletic contest in which your school will
take part, addressing it to the students in your school.
Write an advertisement to introduce a new candy or confection among
grammar-school children.
Write an advertisement for boys' hats; for girls' hats; for overalls;
for a magazine devoted to automobiles; for a magazine devoted to
fiction.
VI. Simplicity in Structure
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