Readers and Writers (1917-1921)Orage, A. R. (Alfred Richard)
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Readers and Writers (1917-1921)
Orage, A. R. (Alfred Richard)
Literature, Modern -- History and criticism
It would be tedious to cite more than one example, and I will take it in
the very first sentence of Mr. Hoare’s translation. “What joy,” he says,
“for those with the poor man’s feelings! Heaven’s Empire is for them,”
the authorised translation of which is too familiar to need quotation. I
do not see what is gained, setting aside the cost, by the substitution of
the exclamatory “What joy ...” for the ecstatic affirmation, “Blessed are
the poor.” Why again, “the poor man,” and, after that, the “poor man’s
feelings”? Why also “Heaven’s Empire” instead of “the Kingdom of Heaven”;
and why “is for them” instead of “theirs is”? The gain, even literally,
is imperceptible, and in cost a world of meaning has been sacrificed.
“Blessed” is an incomparably more spiritual word than “joy”—in English,
at any rate, whatever their respective originals may indicate; and there
is a plane of difference between an incontinent ejaculation such as “What
joy,” which resembles “What fun,” and has in view rather a prospect
than a fact—and the serene and confident utterance of an assured truth.
Further, and again without regard to the literal original, “a poor man’s
feelings” must be miles away, from the intention of the original authors,
since it definitely conveys to us associations derived from social
surroundings, social reform, and what not. Was _this_ the intention of
the Sermon on the Mount, the very location of which symbolised a state
of mind above that of the dwellers in the plain of common life? Was it a
socialist or communist discourse? If not, the “poor man’s feelings,” in
our English colloquial sense, is utterly out of place, and the original
must have meant something symbolically different. The substitution,
again, of “Heaven’s Empire” for the “Kingdom of Heaven” may be, as
Professor Dodd assures us, a more correct literal translation of the
original phrase; but only a literary barbarian can contemplate it without
grieving over the lost worlds of meaning. What is the prospect of an
“Empire,” even Heaven’s Empire, to us to-day? As certainly as the phrase
“Kingdom of Heaven” has come to mean, in English, a state of beatitude,
the reversion to an “Empire” marks the decline of that state to one of
outward pomp and circumstance. The spiritual meaning which must have
characterised the intention of the Sermon on the Mount is completely
sacrificed in the substitution of Empire for Kingdom. The volume is
published by the “Congregational Union of England and Wales,” and it
serves to indicate the depths to which Nonconformist taste can sink. We
only need now this “colloquial English” version in the “nu speling” to
touch bottom.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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