Of the labours of his predecessors in translation Lord Carnarvon makes
ample recognition, though we acknowledge that we do not consider Pope's
Homer 'the work of a great poet,' and we must protest that there is more
in Chapman than 'quaint Elizabethan conceits.' The metre he has selected
is blank verse, which he regards as the best compromise between 'the
inevitable redundancy of rhyme and the stricter accuracy of prose.' This
choice is, on the whole, a sensible one. Blank verse undoubtedly gives
the possibility of a clear and simple rendering of the original. Upon
the other hand, though we may get Homer's meaning, we often miss his
music. The ten-syllabled line brings but a faint echo of the long roll
of the Homeric hexameter, its rapid movement and continuous harmony.
Besides, except in the hands of a great master of song, blank verse is
apt to be tedious, and Lord Carnarvon's use of the weak ending, his habit
of closing the line with an unimportant word, is hardly consistent with
the stateliness of an epic, however valuable it might be in dramatic
verse. Now and then, also, Lord Carnarvon exaggerates the value of the
Homeric adjective, and for one word in the Greek gives us a whole line in
the English. The simple [Greek text], for instance, is converted into
'And when the shades of evening fall around,' in the second book, and
elsewhere purely decorative epithets are expanded into elaborate
descriptions. However, there are many pleasing qualities in Lord
Carnarvon's verse, and though it may not contain much subtlety of melody,
still it has often a charm and sweetness of its own.
The description of Calypso's garden, for example, is excellent:
Around the grotto grew a goodly grove,
Alder, and poplar, and the cypress sweet;
And the deep-winged sea-birds found their haunt,
And owls and hawks, and long-tongued cormorants,
Who joy to live upon the briny flood.
And o'er the face of the deep cave a vine
Wove its wild tangles and clustering grapes.
Four fountains too, each from the other turned,
Poured their white waters, whilst the grassy meads
Bloomed with the parsley and the violet's flower.
The story of the Cyclops is not very well told. The grotesque humour of
the Giant's promise hardly appears in
Thee then, Noman, last of all
Will I devour, and this thy gift shall be,
and the bitter play on words Odysseus makes, the pun on [Greek text], in
fact, is not noticed. The idyll of Nausicaa, however, is very gracefully
translated, and there is a great deal that is delightful in the Circe
episode. For simplicity of diction this is also very good:
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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