Terence's Andrian, a comedy, in five acts : $b Translated into English prose, with critical and explanatory notes.Terence
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Terence's Andrian, a comedy, in five acts : $b Translated into English prose, with critical and explanatory notes.
Terence
Latin drama (Comedy) -- Translations into English; Terence -- Translations into English
_Byrrhia. (aside.) Now, for my master’s sake, I dread to hear his
answer._
Some commentators make this speech come from Davus; but it certainly is
more natural from Byrrhia: because, by the word _dread_, he expresses
a suspense about what the answer might be, which Davus could not feel,
because he and his master had previously agreed upon it.
NOTE 129.
_Byrrhia. (aside.) Ha! I am struck dumb; what did
he say?_
Hem! obmutui! quid dixit!
I think this reading seems more consistent than that which is usually
printed, where obmutuit comes from Davus: as _Byrrhia_ might well
be supposed to _express surprise_ at Pamphilus’s answer, which was
_directly different from what Pamphilus and Charinus had previously
agreed on_.
The dialogue of this scene is carried on too unconnectedly, as Mr.
Colman observes.
“Donatus remarks on this scene between Byrrhia, Simo, Pamphilus, and
Davus, that the dialogue is sustained by four persons, who have little
or no intercourse with each other: so that the scene is not only in
direct contradiction to the precept of Horace excluding a fourth
person, but is also otherwise vicious in its construction. Scenes of
this kind are, I think, much too frequent in Terence, though, indeed,
the form of the ancient theatre was more adapted to the representation
of them than the modern. The multiplicity of speeches _aside_ is also
the chief error in his dialogue; such speeches, though very common
in dramatic writers, ancient and modern, being always more or less
unnatural. Myrtle’s suspicions, grounded on the intelligence drawn from
Bevil’s servant, are more artfully imagined by the English poet, than
those of Charinus, created by employing his servant as a spy on the
actions of Pamphilus.”――COLMAN.
NOTE 130.
_Byrrhia. (aside.) From what I hear, I fancy my master has nothing
to do but to provide himself with another mistress as soon as
possible._
Herus, quantum audio, uxore _excidit_.
“This expression is extremely elegant; excidere uxore means to lose
all hope of obtaining the woman he courted, Excidere lite, to lose a
cause, is a similar phrase. This mode of expression is in imitation
of the Greeks, who used ἐκπιπτεῖν in the same sense.”――MADAME DACIER.
Terence, undoubtedly, was extremely happy in the choice of his words;
and his expressions are frequently so terse and nervous, that they
cannot be translated but by a circumlocution which very much diminishes
their grace: the following are words of that description which occur in
this play,
“_Liberaliter, conflictatur, familiariter, invenustum,
indigeas, pollicitus, excidit, lactasses, ingeram, in
proclive, produceres, conglutinas, illicis, attentus._”
NOTE 131.
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