The Century Illustrated Monthly Magazine, October, 1913: Vol. LXXXVI. New Series: Vol. LXIV. May to October, 1913Various
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The Century Illustrated Monthly Magazine, October, 1913: Vol. LXXXVI. New Series: Vol. LXIV. May to October, 1913
Various
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The translation is intended to be within reach of everybody. It is so
designed that the entire set of volumes can go on a shelf twenty-seven
feet long, or even longer. The first edition will be an _édition de
luxe_ bound in vellum, or perhaps in buckskin, and sold at five hundred
dollars. It will be limited to five hundred copies, and, of course,
sold only to the feeble-minded. The next edition will be the Literary
Edition, sold to artists, authors, and actors.
My plan is to transpose the classical writers so as to give, not the
literal translation word for word, but what is really the modern
equivalent. Let me give an odd sample or two to show what I mean.
Take the passage in the First Book of Homer that describes Ajax, the
Greek, dashing into the battle in front of Troy. Here is the way it
runs (as nearly as I remember) in the usual word for word translation
of the classroom, as done by the very best professor, his spectacles
glittering with the literary rapture of it.
Then he too Ajax on the one hand leaped (or possibly jumped) into
the fight wearing on the other hand yes certainly a steel corselet
(or possibly a bronze under tunic) and on his head of course yes
without doubt he had a helmet with a tossing plume taken from the
mane (or perhaps extracted from the tail) of some horse which
once fed along the banks of the Scamander (and it sees the herd
and raises its head and paws the ground) and in his hand a shield
worth a hundred oxen and on his knees two especially in particular
greaves made by some cunning artificer (or perhaps blacksmith) and
he blows the fire and it is hot.
Thus Ajax leaped (or, better, was propelled from behind) into the
fight.
[Illustration: AJAX, “PROPELLED FROM BEHIND”]
Now that’s grand stuff. There is no doubt of it. There’s a wonderful
movement and force to it. You can almost see it move, it goes so
fast. But the modern reader can’t get it. It won’t mean to him what
it meant to the early Greek. The setting, the costume, the scene have
all got to be changed in order to let the modern reader have a real
equivalent so as to judge for himself just how good the Greek verse
is. In my translation I alter the original just a little, not much
but just enough to give the passage a form that reproduces for us
the proper literary value of the verses, without losing anything of
their majesty. It describes, I may say, the Directors of the American
Industrial Stocks plunging into the Balkan War Cloud:
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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