The Circus, and Other Essays and Fugitive PiecesKilmer, Joyce
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The Circus, and Other Essays and Fugitive Pieces
Kilmer, Joyce
American essays; Literature -- History and criticism
Well, let us imagine Swinburne confronted by the miracle of childhood.
Knowing that his reputation must stand or fall by this attempt, he
endeavors to record all the splendid emotions and noble comparisons
which childhood suggests to him. And what is the result? What is the
climax of thought in his poem? The climax is this: Swinburne says that
the baby about whom he is writing, who happens to be wearing a plush
cap, looks like a moss rose bud in its soft sheath.
This is a pleasant idea. Undoubtedly it pleased the baby's mother and
the baby herself when she grew up. But these are scarcely the words that
shall tremble on the lips of time.
Francis Thompson was great enough to do the obvious thing. When he was
drawing inspiration from the miracle of childhood, he did not think
about plush caps and moss roses. Instead, he did the most natural and
the most beautiful thing. He thought about the Infant Jesus. Childhood
to him suggested Him Who made childhood Divine. And in "Ex Ore
Infantium" he gave that thought immortal expression.
But in comparing the plush cap of the baby to a moss rose, Swinburne did
not think he had said the last word on the subject. As the result of
prolonged meditation on childhood, he produced another poem in which he
really did accomplish something remarkable. He found a rhyme for
"babe."
Now, I doubt if any of you know the rhyme for "babe," unless you happen
to be familiar with this poem of Swinburne's or with those of Chaucer,
who also used this word. There is such a word and Swinburne ingeniously
introduces it towards the end of his poem. He writes:
Babe, if rhyme be none
For that small sweet word,
Babe, the sweetest one
Ever heard,
Right it is and sweet
Rhyme should not keep true
Time with such a sweet
Thing as you ...
... None can tell in metre
Fit for ears on earth
What sweet star grew sweeter
At your birth.
Wisdom doubts what may be;
Hope with smile sublime
Trusts, but neither, baby
Knows the rhyme.
Wisdom lies down lonely;
Hope keeps watch from far;
None but one seer only
Sees the star.
Love alone, with yearning
Heart for astrolabe
Takes the star's height, burning
O'er the babe.
Compare this, not with Francis Thompson's "Hound of Heaven," but with
another poem on childhood, and from that poem decide which of the two
poets had the real inspiration. Compare it with Francis Thompson's poem
to his god-child. In this he imagines himself as having died, and he
imagines that the little boy has died too. So he gives the little boy a
kind of working plan of Heaven--he tells him where he may find him after
he goes to Heaven. He writes:
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