3^2. rest _struck out before_ lave. 4^1. Up _struck out before_ Out. Faughan Wood, _here and_ 7^1; _in_ 12^1, Faughan Wood. 7^1. Up the then. 9^1. gude _struck out before_ red, _and_ red _written over_. 15^1. _Originally_ down by; down _struck out_. 15^2. _Originally_ in by; in _struck out. These last two changes, and others, seem to be editorial._ _1–5, 12–14, 16, with variations, are 1–5, 14–16, 20 of the later edition of the ballad in Scott’s Minstrelsy. Slight alterations, such as Scott was accustomed to make, do not require notice._ Scott, 3^{1,2}. He told na _in the Minstrelsy: almost certainly an arbitrary change, and not a good one, since it makes the hardship to Lauderdale the less._ 4^1. Lochinvar (_also in_ 14^1) _for_ Lord Faughanwood; _introduced from_ #D#. 15^2. clad in the Johnstone grey: _for which no authority is known_. 16^3. Leader lads _for_ ladies gay: _probably a conjectural emendation_. 20^4. For fear of sic disorder: _presumably a change for rhyme_, disorder _suggested by_ 2^4. #D.# 9^1. 24. 12^1. It’s _is of later insertion, perhaps editorial._ 14^1. I came not here: _obscured in the process of binding_. 20. _This must be a mixture of two stanzas. The third line has no sense, and is not much improved by reading_ temper good, _as in #C# 17^1._ #E.# _Written mostly in long lines, without separation of stanzas, sometimes without a proper separation of verses. The division here made is partly conjectural._ 2^1. She courted him. 3^4. entreid _or_ entried: _indistinct_. 6, 7^{1,2}. His father an his mother came they came a but he came no It was a foul play Lochinvar As his comrades sat drinkine at the wine 7^3. ... on. 13^2. Lodged _for_ Loved. 16^3. Gae man glass me your. 17^{2,3}. between them tva man Man I see, _etc._ #F.# 23^1. _We have had a similar verse in the north-Scottish version of_ ‘Hugh Spencer,’ No 158, #C# 11: O bridles brak and great horse lap. #H.# 11^4. It was awful foul foul play. Awful _was probably a misunderstanding of_ a foul. #I.# 8^3. Lank-a-Shires. 14^3. He _is written over_ And. 15^1. bank, _the original reading, is changed to_ heuch. #J.# 12^1. Oh. 15^4. go _is written over_ ride. _Motherwell made two slight changes in his printed copy._ #K.# 1^4. my mony. 2^1. Loch-in-var; _and always_. 3^1. South sea bank. 7^1. the South sea bank. 10^3. For _for_ Where: _probably a misprint, perhaps a preservation of the northern_ f _for_ wh. 13^3. the brigs broken, _wrongly repeated_. 16^2. When we, _preserved from_ 12^2.