4 For anguish great they began to rend their hair they > (Redundant) 5 And beat their breasts, and naked flesh to tear. 6 And when they both had wept and wailed their fill, 7 Then forth they ran, like two amazed deer, amazed > panic-stricken 8 Half-mad through malice, and revenging will, revenging will > [desire for vengeance] 9 To follow her that was the causer of their ill. ill > misfortune; calamity 103.23 Whom ouertaking, they gan loudly bray, 2 With hollow howling, and lamenting cry, Shamefully at her rayling all the way, 4 And her accusing of dishonesty, That was the flowre of faith and chastity; 6 And still amidst her rayling, she did pray, That plagues, and mischiefs, and long misery 8 Might fall on her, and follow all the way, And that in endlesse error she might euer stray. 1 Whom overtaking, they gan loudly bray gan > did; began to bray > cry out 2 With hollow howling and lamenting cry, hollow > insincere 3 Shamefully at her railing all the way, 4 And her accusing of dishonesty, dishonesty > unchastity, lewdness 5 That was the flower of faith and chastity; 6 And still, amidst her railing, she did pray still > continually she > [Corceca; Abessa cannot talk - see 103.11:4] 7 That plagues, and mischiefs, and long misery, mischiefs > misfortunes 8 Might fall on her, and follow all the way, 9 And that in endless error she might ever stray. error > wandering; error 103.24 But when she saw her prayers nought preuaile, 2 She backe returned with some labour lost; And in the way as she did weepe and waile, 4 A knight her met in mighty armes embost, Yet knight was not for all his bragging bost, 6 But subtill _Archimag_, that _Vna_ sought By traynes into new troubles to haue tost: 8 Of that old woman tydings he besought, If that of such a Ladie she could tellen ought. 1 But when she saw her prayers naught prevail, 2 She back returned with some labour lost; 3 And in the way, as she did weep and wail, 4 A knight her met in mighty arms embossed: arms > armour embossed > encased 5 Yet knight was not, for all his bragging boast, boast > pomp, vainglory 6 But subtle Archimago, that Una sought subtle > wily Una sought > [sought Una] 7 By trains into new troubles to have tossed. trains > tricks, snares 8 Of that old woman tidings he besought, besought > asked earnestly 9 If of such a lady she could tell aught. 103.25 Therewith she gan her passion to renew, 2 And cry, and curse, and raile, and rend her heare, Saying, that harlot she too lately knew, 4 That causd her shed so many a bitter teare, And so forth told the story of her feare: 6 Much seemed he to mone her haplesse chaunce, And after for that Ladie did +inquire+; 8 Which being taught, he forward gan aduaunce His faire enchaunted steed, and eke his charmed launce. 7 inquire > inquere _1590, 1609_