Fine is the fantastic and infrequent landscape in Lovelace’s poetry:
‘This is the palace of the wood,
And court o’ the royal oak, where stood
The whole nobility.’
In more than one place Lucasta’s, or Amarantha’s, or Laura’s hair is
sprinkled with dew or rain almost as freshly and wildly as in
Wordsworth’s line.
Lovelace, who loved freedom, seems to be enclosed in so narrow a book;
yet it is but a ‘hermitage.’ To shake out the light and spirit of its
leaves is to give a glimpse of liberty not to him, but to the world.
In _To Lucasta_ I have been bold to alter, at the close, ‘you’ to ‘thou.’
Lovelace sent his verses out unrevised, and the inconsistency of pronouns
is common with him, but nowhere else so distressing as in this brief and
otherwise perfect poem. The fault is easily set right, and it seems even
an unkindness not to lend him this redress, offered him here as an act of
comradeship.
LUCASTA PAYING HER OBSEQUIES.—Page 165.
That errors should abound in the text of Lovelace is the more lamentable
because he was apt to make a play of phrases that depend upon the
precision of a comma—nay, upon the precision of the voice in reading.
_Lucasta Paying her Obsequies_ is a poem that makes a kind of dainty
confusion between the two vestals—the living and the dead; they are
‘equal virgins,’ and you must assign the pronouns carefully to either as
you read. This, read twice, must surely be placed amongst the loveliest
of his lovely writings. It is a joy to meet such a phrase as ‘her brave
eyes.’
TO ALTHEA, FROM PRISON.—Page 166.
This is a poem that takes the winds with an answering flight. Should
they be ‘birds’ or ‘gods’ that wanton in the air in the first of these
gallant stanzas? Bishop Percy shied at ‘gods,’ and with admirable
judgment suggested ‘birds,’ an amendment adopted by the greater number of
succeeding editors, until one or two wished for the other phrase again,
as an audacity fit for Lovelace. But the Bishop’s misgiving was after
all justified by one of the MSS. of the poem, in which the ‘gods’ proved
to be ‘birds’ long before he changed them. The reader may ask, what is
there to choose between birds so divine and gods so light? But to begin
with ‘gods’ would be to make an anticlimax of the close. Lovelace led
from birds and fishes to winds, and from winds to angels.
‘When linnet-like confined’ is another modern reading. ‘When, like
committed linnets,’ daunted the eighteenth century. Nevertheless, it is
right seventeenth century, and is now happily restored; happily, because
Lovelace would not have the word ‘confined’ twice in this little poem.
A HORATIAN ODE.—Page 169.
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