The French stage has been a prolific nursery for these skilful workmen,
and they have managed to extract splendid successes from their work. It
is by comparing their English adaptations with a simple translation of
the work that one best sees the improvement. For instance, there is the
"Two Orphans," with a plot and incidents so repulsive in the original
that its translation failed in London in spite of its weird power.
Adapted and cleansed by a clever American author, it was the great
success of last year in New York, and is now running a fresh career of
success. Another instance that occurs is Sardou's "Fernande." It was
altered and adapted in New York by Augustin Daly, and succeeded. Another
version by Mr. Schönberg, then of Wallack's, a straight translation,
failed to secure a hearing in Boston, and ended in a lawsuit. This was
not for want of merit in the translation, which was excellent, but, as
appears from a comparison of the two plays, simply because Daly had
improved on Sardou. The alterations were small, but masterly, and showed
that Daly understood his business. In Sardou's play there appears a
certain character, a young count (I forget his name) who comes in at the
beginning of the first act, the close of the last. In the last he has
some very important business to do, but he appears nowhere else. Of
himself he does not aid the plot, but his last action is indispensable.
In the original play also appears the Spanish Commander, a mere sketch
in the first act. Daly suppressed the Count altogether, gave his best
business to the Commander, and brought the latter in all through the
play. The result was one good character instead of two poor ones, and
indicates a canon which can be confirmed by many other instances. This
canon shapes itself something like this:
XII. Concentrate the interest on few characters, and avoid
numerous unimportant parts.
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