=34. TAETRVM= _R. J. Tarrant_ TINCTV _Ehwald_ TINCTVM _codd_. _Tinctum_ is
impossible: if the word were used, it would have to go with _uerba_.
Compare _Ibis_ 53-54 'liber iambus / _tincta_ Lycambeo sanguine _tela_
dabit', _Ibis_ 491 '[tamque cadas domitus ...] quam qui _dona_ tulit
Nesseo _tincta_ ueneno', _EP_ III i 26 _'tinctaque_ mortifera tabe
_sagitta_ madet', and _EP_ III iii 106 _'tinctaque_ mordaci _spicula_
felle gerant'. Ehwald's _tinctu_ is linguistically and palaeographically
somewhat better than Merkel's _tinguat_: for similar corruptions compare
_Fast_ III 612 'flet tamen _admonitu_ motus, Elissa, tui', where many
manuscripts read _admonitus_, and _Tr_ I iv 9 'pinea texta sonant pulsu
[_Rothmaler_: pulsi _codd_], stridore rudentes'. Even so, 'Each of your
words carries poison, as though it had been dipped in it' seems awkward.
For Professor Tarrant's _taetrum_ compare Lucretius I 936 'absinthia
taetra', _Dirae_ 23 'taetra uenena', and _Hal_ 131 'nigrum ... uirus'.
=34. VIRVS HABENT.= Compare _Tr_ IV i 84 'aut telo _uirus habente_ perit'
& III x 64 'nam uolucri ferro tinctile _uirus inest_'.
=35-36. HOSTIBVS EVENIAT QUAM SIS VIOLENTVS IN ARMIS / SENTIRE.= _Hostibus
eueniat_ is a common phrase in Ovid: compare _Am_ II x 16-17 '_hostibus
eueniat_ uita seuera meis! / _hostibus eueniat_ uiduo dormire cubili',
_Am_ III xi 16, _AA_ III 247, _Fast_ III 493-94 'at, puto, praeposita
est fuscae mihi Candida paelex! / _eueniat nostris hostibus_ ille dolor
[_recc quidam_: color _codd plerique_]!', and _Her_ XVI 219-20 (Paris to
Helen) '_hostibus eueniant_ conuiuia talia nostris, / experior posito
qualia saepe mero!'.
=37. QVAE TIBI TAM TENVI CVRA LIMANTVR.= 'Which are sharpened by you with
such painstaking care'. For this meaning of _limare_ compare Pliny _NH_
VIII 71 'cornu ad saxa _limato_' and Cic _Brut_ 236 '[M. Piso ...]
habuit a natura genus quoddam _acuminis_, quod etiam arte _limauerat_'.
=37-38. VT OMNES / ISTIVS INGENVI PECTORIS ESSE NEGENT.= 'So that all
would deny that they are the product of your kindly spirit'; for this
sense of _ingenuus_ compare Catullus LXVIII 37-38 'quod cum ita sit,
nolim statuas nos mente maligna / id facere aut _animo_ non satis
_ingenuo_'. _Ingenui pectoris_ is my correction for the manuscripts'
INGENIVM CORPORIS, which could only mean 'so that all would deny that
the talent of your body exists'; Ovid can hardly be identifying the
_tela_ of 36 with Brutus' _ingenium_. Wheeler translates 'On these [the
missiles of your tongue] you use the file with such extreme care that
none would recognize in them your real nature', and André 'que personne
ne croirait qu'un tel esprit habite ton corps'; neither translation fits
the Latin. Shackleton Bailey's INGENIVM NOMINIS still leaves unsolved
the problem of _ingenium_.
The corruption of _ingenui_ to _ingenium_ (or rather, _ingeniU_) is
simple enough; and the interchange of _pectus_ and _corpus_ is a common
error.
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