=13. PRODVCATVR= _MHI_ VT DVCATVR _LTB2F2ul_ VT DICATVR _B1CF1_.
_Producere_ is the correct technical term for 'lengthen'; compare
Quintilian VII ix 13 '_productio_ quoque in scripto et correptio in
dubio relicta causa est ambiguitatis' & IX iii 69 'uoces ['words']
... _productione_ tantum uel correptione mutatae'. _Vt ducatur_ is
unlikely to be right. _Ducatur_ could certainly stand for _producatur_
(although this would destroy the balance with the following
_correptius_), but the verb is clearly indicated as a potential
subjunctive by the preceding _potes ... uenire_; and _ut_ (which would in
any case be taken as correlative with _ut_ in line 12) cannot stand with
this construction. _Vt dicatur_, Ehwald's preferred reading ('dicatur et
sit secunda [syllaba] productâ morâ longa'--_KB_ 68), is even less
likely to be right, since _dicere_ in this context could only mean
'pronounce', as at Cic _Or_ 159 '"inclitus" dicimus breui prima littera,
"insanus" producta'.
=13. EXIT.= _Exire_ similarly used of words being uttered at _Her_ VIII
115-16 (Hermione speaking) 'saepe Neoptolemi pro nomine nomen Orestae /
_exit_, et errorem uocis ut omen amo'. _OLD exeo_ 2d gives other
instances from Cicero (_Brutus_ 265), Seneca (_Ben_ V 19 4), and
Quintilian (XI iii 33), but from verse outside Ovid only Martial XII xi
3, where the word has a somewhat different meaning: 'cuius Pimpleo lyra
clarior exit ab antro?'.
=14. PORRECTA= is equivalent to _longa_, and belongs to _secunda_ (_sc_
syllaba) by hypallage. Compare Quintilian I vi 32 'aut correptis aut
_porrectis_ ... litteris syllabisue' & I vii 14 'usque ad Accium et ultra
_porrectas_ syllabas geminis, ut dixi, uocalibus scripserunt [that is,
they wrote _uiita_ for _uita_ and so on; such spellings occur sometimes
in inscriptions]', and Rutilius Lupus I 3.
=15. VITIIS.= _Vitium_ similarly used for faults of diction at _AA_ III
295-96 'in _uitio_ decor est: quaerunt male reddere uerba; / discunt
posse minus quam potuere loqui', Cic _de Or_ I 116, and Quintilian I v
17, a discussion of the shortening and lengthening of vowels; this he
includes among the 'quae accidunt in dicendo _uitia_'. Ovid is probably
combining this sense with that of 'poetic weakness', for which compare
_Tr_ I vii 39-40 'quicquid in his igitur _uitii_ rude carmen habebit, /
emendaturus, si licuisset, eram' and the use of _uitiosus_ at xiii 17
and _Tr_ IV i 1 and IV x 61.
=16. MERITO PECTVS HABERE NEGER.= 'People would quite rightly say that I
was ignorant'. Compare _Met_ XIII 290-91 & 295 (Ulysses is speaking of
Ajax's claim to the arms of Achilles) 'artis opus tantae rudis et _sine
pectore_ miles / indueret? neque enim clipei caelamina nouit ... postulat
ut capiat _quae non intellegit_ arma!'.
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