=14. MARTICOLIS= is possibly an Ovidian innovation, being found elsewhere
only at _Tr_ V iii 21-22 'adusque niuosum / Strymona uenisti
Marticolamque Geten'.
=14. NASO.= The use of the third person adds to the emotive power of the
tricolon 'ager ... hirundo ... Naso'.
=15-16. TALIA SVSCENSENT PROPTER MIHI VERBA TOMITAE, / IRAQVE CARMINIBVS
PVBLICA MOTA MEIS.= For the similar omission of the _est_ of a perfect
passive, even in the presence of a parallel finite verb, see _Met_ VII
517-18 'Aeacus ingemuit tristique ita uoce _locutus_: / "flebile
principium melior fortuna secuta est"'.
=15. SVSCENSENT.= The word is foreign to high poetry. It occurs in Ovid
only here and at _EP_ III i 89-90 'nec mihi _suscense_, totiens si
carmine nostro / quod facis ut facias teque imitere rogo'; the only
instances from other poetry cited at _OLD suscenseo_ are from _Her_
XVI-XXI and Martial.
SVSCENSENT is the spelling of _C_; the other manuscripts have
SVCCENSENT. I print _susc-_ because that is the spelling given by the
ninth-century Hamburg manuscript at _EP_ III i 89 (cited above), where
most manuscripts offer _succ-_. _Succ-_ is, however, quite possibly
correct, for although _susc-_ is the spelling of the ancient manuscripts
of Plautus and Terence (and of the older manuscripts of the _Heroides_),
_succ-_ is found at Livy XLII 46 8 in the fifth-century Vienna codex.
=18. PLECTAR.= Similar uses at _Tr_ III v 49 'inscia quod crimen uiderunt
lumina, _plector_' and _EP_ III iii 64 (Ovid to Amor) 'meque loco
_plecti_ commodiore uelit'.
=18. AB INGENIO= is parallel to _per carmina_ in the preceding line; for
the idiom, see at x 46 _ab amne_ (p 346).
=20. TELAQVE ... QVAE NOCVERE SEQVOR.= See at xiii 41 _nocuerunt_ (p 406).
=23. SED NIHIL ADMISI.= 'But I have committed no crime'--Wheeler. Compare
_EP_ III vi 13 'nec scelus _admittas_ si consoleris amicum'. _Admittere_
in this sense belonged to daily speech: _TLL_ I 752 77 cites Plaut
_Trin_ 81, Ter _HT_ 956 'quid ego tantum sceleris _admisi_ miser',
Lucilius 690 Marx, and Hor _Ep_ I xvi 53.
=25. EXCVTIAT.= See at viii 17 _excutias_ (p 263).
=25. NOSTRI MONIMENTA LABORIS= is rather grand, perhaps because Ovid
intended the poem to come near the end of the collection. At _Tr_ III
iii 78 Ovid's _libelli_ are called his most lasting _monimenta_, and at
_EP_ III v 35 Ovid flatteringly refers to Maximus Cotta's _monimenta
laboris_.
=26. LITTERA DE VOBIS EST MEA QVESTA NIHIL.= This, of course, is
manifestly untrue. See _Tr_ V x entire, and compare for instance _Tr_ V
vii 45-46 'siue homines [_sc_ specto], uix sunt homines hoc nomine
digni, / quamque lupi saeuae plus feritatis habent'.
=28. ET QVOD PVLSETVR MVRVS AB HOSTE QVEROR.= Compare _EP_ III i 25 'adde
metus _et quod murus pulsatur ab hoste_'.
=30. SOLVM= _BCFILT_ LOCVM _MH_. The interchange is very common (examples
at _Met_ I 345 & VII 57); the reverse corruption in some manuscripts at
_EP_ II ii 96 'sit tua mutando gratia blanda _loco_'.
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